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Old 09-28-03, 11:15 PM   #1
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my plea

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Lord have mercy on my soul/ I kill so many foes/ Death apart of my gene/ Now I wanta close my eyes and go/ See myself floating high in the sky/ Not running from the cops or throwing on a disguise/ See myself in heaven i let my fate play uout/ If I don't get there today the next day might count/ Sort of like the countdown to my dismise/ When the hand struct the nine bullets spraying through blinds/ Caught one in the chest thought I died that day, than i open my eyes nurse all in my face/ Said i was lucky to survive that shot if medics wan't their earlier you probably die ono the spot/ But what's the use of that I can't even use my arm, You got the other one, it's not the same with one arm/ How soon you think that i'll be back on my feet I hope soon as possible,why, Foes to defeat
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Old 09-29-03, 08:57 AM   #2
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ya aint writin in lines

"Lord have mercy on my soul/ I kill so many foes/ Death apart of my gene/ Now I wanta close my eyes and go/ See myself floating high in the sky/ Not running from the cops or throwing on a disguise"

wheres the structure and rhyming scheme.................wanna try and get a flo goin dawg........peace
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Old 09-29-03, 10:43 AM   #3
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are you retarded?
I closed two of your thread from the 28th because you're only allowed one a day, and you go and post a 3rd one?
anything like this happens again, I'll get you banned.
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