Diamond Mindz VS Omens

TEXT MATCH-UP FOUR
*10 Lines - no more, no less.
*No-Shows count in automatic DQ .
*No crew votes .
*Over 300 posts to vote - comprehensive breakdown preferred .
*No quoting previous votes .
Verse By: Sunday, 9/28 11:59 PM EST.

G'Luck . .

Special Thanks To G. Hod For Set Of Rules

you hoe, you stole his rules.

RalphsBagels [11:04 PM]: that was next .
Legacy 21239 [11:04 PM]: lol
Legacy 21239 [11:04 PM]: i no where you reside.

RalphsBagels [11:04 PM]: do you, now ?
RalphsBagels [11:04 PM]: who art thou ?
Legacy 21239 [11:04 PM]: yes, in elite front lines.
Legacy 21239 [11:05 PM]: lol
RalphsBagels [11:05 PM]: I was in there .
Legacy 21239 [11:05 PM]: u still are according to the list..
Legacy 21239 [11:05 PM]: i could be feeble minded
Legacy 21239 [11:05 PM]: or maybe im some random guy iming you..
Legacy 21239 [11:06 PM]: :-)
Legacy 21239 [11:06 PM]: with blue smilys.
RalphsBagels [11:06 PM]:
Legacy 21239 [11:06 PM]: now go vote on bizzurc vs some random guy, and vote fairly, or i will cause your bagels to go stale...
Legacy 21239 [11:07 PM]: mr. god, sir.
RalphsBagels [11:07 PM]: bwah - random guy ehhhh
Legacy 21239 [11:07 PM]: no, the other name is feeble minded
Legacy 21239 [11:07 PM]: but i am some random guy right?
Legacy 21239 [11:08 PM]: about the only person on rb who enjoys fair voting?
RalphsBagels [11:08 PM]: kore ect
RalphsBagels [11:08 PM]: somebody bit my rules
RalphsBagels [11:08 PM]: what the hey
Legacy 21239 [11:08 PM]: lol, in my thread
Legacy 21239 [11:08 PM]: yup they did...
Legacy 21239 [11:08 PM]: i thought u gave them permission...
RalphsBagels [11:08 PM]: nope
Legacy 21239 [11:08 PM]: or i woulda put sumthin about that in my verse
Legacy 21239 [11:08 PM]: and it woulda been dope...
Legacy 21239 [11:09 PM]: just for you
RalphsBagels [11:09 PM]: in - deed
RalphsBagels [11:09 PM]: edit .
Legacy 21239 [11:09 PM]: nah
Legacy 21239 [11:09 PM]: thatd be wrong
Legacy 21239 [11:09 PM]: ima edit his rules, tho.
Legacy 21239 [11:09 PM]: say "stolen from ghod"
Legacy 21239 [11:09 PM]: lol
Legacy 21239 [11:09 PM]: or not funny...
RalphsBagels [11:10 PM]: it was a good try . .
RalphsBagels [11:10 PM]: nearly chuckle-worthy .
Legacy 21239 [11:10 PM]: cool

how dare thou steal from god! blasphemy!

fuck cash and money orders
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check!

for the win.

and bizz and me will talc over aim to decide which votes are fair etc and agree on it.. (if someone crew votes hates or d/rs)

no one line votes, no quoted votes. any of those for either of us will be removed.

some of my words are underlined in the verse i am told, dont loocat the lincs as i didnt mac them. they are lincs tp rb.com sponsors pages. aparently, when you put certainwords it changes them to lincs of rb.com's sponsors pages.

Keep in mind his name is Bizz

yo..

im landing hits. . & call this enterprise cuz i handle Bizz. .
this is rb's cookie jar.. cuz he never has a hand in it. .
games dismantling, im decaying Bizz like unemployment
pretend you wrote this..and read for ya own enjoyment!
ya the definition of dope? well websters isn't working yet. .
A searching vet pays tribute to skills.. so bizzurks in debt!
merking threat? . . 2%, emotion, Bizzurk, so whats next?
DMs worth shit, in his 1st post im ripping this sluts checks!
cut text - and edit it myself, so at least his rating's something..
i describe his skills best in my sig, simply by stating nothing!

^^ heat rite tehre..feelin it
ill be abck when ...2 drops shud beb a coo battle
Pc........^^^ coo shit feebs

^never freepost in my thrad again.
and i no ur alias, and ur a d/r if i am correct in wut i thinc ur alias is. do not vote.

uppin. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

Nice Drop Kyle, But Not Nice Enough!

I’ll Subdue ya crew, even tony the tiger wouldn’t say they’re great/
U couldn’t get a pound for ya 2 cents if you spit exchange rates/
I’ve heard all ya lines b4 Nucca What!? morse code/
I’m a crossing guard, I stop kids like you by the busload/
I’m second to none, dis 15 year old virgin’s second to nun/
Like god’s greet’n jesus and DMC’s boy in addias, run son!/
Asshole! all ya spits shit, ya gett’n out-done like sex in public/
Ya a vet respected? Lmao, lets get an opinion from chrit/
Kyle couldn’t kick jams if he punted smuckers to the floor/
RB MC’s from Baltimore? Quoth "The Raven" never more!/


*edited for spelling by feeble, my homie bizzurk told me to*

Preferred Vote:
explanation of which lines you thought were good from each verse and which you didnt.

then...

personals- (and who won)
punches- (and who won)
flow- (and who won)
wordplay- (and who won)
metties- (and who won)
multies- (and who won)
Oh damn factor- (and who won) this is how many times you thought the persons lines were good. the person you thought had themost good lines wins this.

then who ur voting or.

purple haze aa sonnn time..if you vote you will be shot.

breakdown

punches both
flow both
consistancy *cough neither cough*
metas biz
multies feeb
funniness biz
worth readin both
wordplay biz
personals both
structure both but kinda feeb easier to read

overall this was a close battle but i gotta go wit biz no hate jus my opinion

best line in entire battle

games dismantling, im decaying Bizz like unemployment
^8/10
pretend you wrote this..and read for ya own enjoyment!
^10.1/10

^^^^damn febble had the best line but only if he was a lil more aggressive like this throught out the entire verse that shit was tight tho

can yall both please peep this for me its gettin slept

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81556

whatever you thinc, but...
from now on vet votes only.
including:
any mods,
anyone in LLL.
wores vote fairly!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thats all i wnt, fair votes for either one of us. none of this hate voting bullshit.

I’ll Subdue ya crew, even tony the tiger wouldn’t say “they’re great”/
U couldn’t “get a pound for ya 2 cents” if you spit exchange rates/

I’ve heard all ya lines b4 “Nucca What!?” morse code/
I’m a crossing guard, I “stop kids” like you by the busload/


^LMAO...Bizz...your style is newbish but its obvious that you have got skills...those lines were dope.


Feeble..

im landing hits. . & call this enterprise cuz i handle Bizz. .
this is rb's cookie jar.. cuz he never has a hand in it. .


^the opener was good but the rest was average at best..you didnt seem to bring it here..


surprisingly, i think that Bizzurk won this battle..before this id never heard or seen of him... but he showed me potential here..


vote-Bizzurk

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Good Battle here...Good shit from both MC's

Personals: Tie
Punches: BiZZ
Flow: Tie
Wordplay: Biz
Meta's: BizZ
Multis: BiZZ
Oh Damn Factor (LoL): BiZZ

I’ve heard all ya lines b4 “Nucca What!?” morse code/
I’m a crossing guard, I “stop kids” like you by the busload/
^Oh Damn Factor LoL

I’ll Subdue ya crew, even tony the tiger wouldn’t say “they’re great”/
U couldn’t “get a pound for ya 2 cents” if you spit exchange rates/
^OH Damn Factor again

Feeble u had a good verse, but your punches were kind of mediocre didnt really have the "Oh Damn Factor" (LoL) like BiZZurKs did...He basically just out punched ya man, nothin u can really do about it....good battle though, enjoyed the read...

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