im anything and everything besides dull/
a walking library in the shape of a skull/
biceps the size of hulks, noone wanna trade hits/
feel the hollow rounds of a gun that holds 8 tips/
make the whole state flip, when i throw down/
and have seven scuds and a hbomb aimed at ya hometown/
im throne bound, the way im decapitatin a lord/
and i need is one mic, and a polished samurai sword/
a mics cord, is prolly my most deadliest weapon/
i make thugs cry the way im excessivly wreckn/
mics get infected cuz my lyrics are sick/
im like reptile from MK the way my spits are acidic/
you got heart? lets see, ill rip it and show it like kano/
roundhouse the back of ur head and see where ur brains go/
my main flows, gains bones, to where i have to give it away, like gameshows/
in a crew with insane bros that dont take no for an answer/
have u in a bed shakn ur head, as i inject u wit cancer/
throw u in the damn dirt, covered wit mud/
take the slugs to ya chest, embrace it like a thug/
six feet we dig for u, give respect and be brace/
cuz even real niggas die in a shallow grave/

aght homie, i was feelin that, the vocab was pretty good, ur wordplay was ok, ima say u should probably try and fit in some more multis, but ur structure was good, ur flow felll off a little, but whatever. overall that wasnt a bad post, keep droppin and elevatin man, ill be lookin for ur shit.

yo if u have the time can u check out my latest open mic?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8469#post808469
thanx

peace.....

tight piece god. this shit was ill, good wordplay, good rhymes scheme, tight imagery, tight structure, all u need is more multis, over all nice drop keep roppin tha hotness.~1~
hit my new piece up when u get on.


oh yea good to talk to ya fool ill have to come to ya house one day soon and well smoke out and shit ya know what im syain,keep it real.~1~