LoCo = Me..

[Intro-LiL LoCo]
Who you tyrin to run up on~
shit nigga im crazier then the deff LoCo
Just watch me bust on ya//

[LoCo]
ill thug up a nigga for the feelin of pullin da trigga~
i aint like any otha Emcee~i dun wnna be in dis industry/

[Speedy]
yea its me the multi masta~i aint gon be usin none~
yall niggas mind still aint fasta~respectin me like the local pasta/(pastor)/

[LoCo]
got dis gangsta spit on da lock~I aint sayin im da next big or pac~
but i will roll up on u~wit all da 'Eyes On Me' shit im 'Ready to Die'/

[Speedy]
Run up on me wit nine milli meter~this is my sawed-you-bout to meet 'her'~
obsurd-words-devide-my insides-wit pride-i sit a side-and watch Loco handle dis shit/

[LoCo]
runnin up on me wit past beef~u gon 'goto sleep'~
i creep up~and handle the present~cuz the future is comin~and u aint invited//

[Speedy]
my clip-is-fully-loaded~like a cali election the-runner up-wish he voted~
Consoted~my work as a thug~Hoped~i stil-didnt say KING LOVE/

[LoCo]
I wearin Doin da C-Walk~and i got the black n gold on~
niggas kno i neva hoped~i deff poped~niggas got droped~that why i aint looked down upon..

{Speedy+LoCo} AMOR DE REY
C KILLA LK iS ILLA
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uppin

aight i thought that post was pretty good. i was feelin the worplay and vocab. the flow was on target. u had some ok multis, but it made for a good read. keep postin yall, i thought that was good.

yo if u have the time can u check out my post?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace.....

Yeah this was a pretty good peice i thought, was a good read, your flow was good it didnt really get off track, your vocab was good, and your wordplay was good, overall id say it was a good peice, keep dropping.