Take a lesson from what I'm manefesting/
This is a text to be testing./
Stand up straight like my penus erecting/
Checking, the styles so mortal to kombat like da ebola infecting/
Its high school in here, the jocks are to stupid to be engaging./
Copy Cats prowl my alleys looking for a verse to begin chasing/
Like a mouse, I know my destenation is deep in the basement/
I take a risk posting flows as suckas empty out bullet casings/
Tellin it how i see the panorama, i care less, fuck da "fama"/
Fake m.c's who fire up my temper get blasted with a gama/
I respect m.c's who recognize that this young ese's stamina/
Distance typing around this rapbattle diameter/
All the freestylers that are in the circle call it a cypher/
Not dope, tight, or ill, just having fun trying to get higher/
Above ameteur is cool enough cuz i never get tired/
I'm like bond fire, lit up to scorch the your whole sattire/
Electro magnetic i recharge my battery without a plier/
Can do it myself strait dyer as this flow ends murdering
without hire/

i like this verse it a hot drop
u got skills, i cant tell of anything wrong wit the verse thats too major


peace

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that was a pretty good post man, i thought the flow fell off a little, but i guess it depends on the reader, the wordplay was ok, the vocab was good, the content and topic were original, overall good post, keep postin and elevatin, i enjoyed readin that.

peace.....

thanks for the reply my friend. i will keep an eye on your flows the same way you did to my flows. Just comin real with ill techniques that i practice just for a good time. i know what i am capable of, but there are more like me out there who take it to a different level. mad props to you and your homies dog. peace out

i thought it was well composed and flawless especielly if it was spit not writ