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Chek In's Due: Wendesday 10/01/03
Verse's Due: Friday 10/03/03

Check In..

I'ma Probably Go 14-16 Lines..

Good Luck..

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i'm here....
hello mystik.
pzZzZz. . .

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Yes, You Are Good At Topicals But This Is A Whole New Ball Game..
And No, This Is Not The Time Or Place To Discuss Ya Fantasies, Shame!
Coz Duper Gets More Ass Than Jerusalem’s Very Own Donkey Convention..
But Now Ya Moderator D/R Cant Vote, Now A Loss Is In Contention..
Sand’s Over-Rated, Gets His Wins By Sayin To RB, Blow Me!..
I Looked Up Ya Previous Battles, Meh , What Ya Gonna Show Me??..
How Bout Ya Pic? We All Know Ya Ugly, You Could Use Another Disguise..
When Sand Tries To Face The Music, He Finds That It Covers Its Eyes..
Its No Surpise For Sand To Get 2nd Place…He’s Witnessed It Many A Time..
Its RemarqabL!! How Things Don’t Your Way When You Stretch A Line..
& There’s No Need To Tell, The World Knows Your Pussy…Ya Secrets Out..
And Fuck…No Need For Tampons To Slap You, To Put Ya Lights Out..
From Barney To Betty, Don't Mind The Rubble From Forced Pressure..
Writing? Don't Go Through The Trouble, Save Your Drafts For War Efforts..


14 Lines..

Good Luck..

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homo i guessed your the type that's gay
since i spell head whenever i type your name
the fight to fame? lyrics i'll have you school taught
besides, you don't spit hot, you drool raw *
i pulled a fools card, you stupid, lame, soft fuck
my flow can't even drown you. . .your styles already washed up
the question i'll pop up. . . . .no need to hide it
another penile reference in your label. . . . mr. my stik.
make you die quick, with sliced wrists and die quicker
punchlines?. . . only teeth mystik seperated were on my zipper!



h . o e




* spell it backwards assholes.

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Yes, You Are Good At Topicals But This Is A Whole New Ball Game..
And No, This Is Not The Time Or Place To Discuss Ya Fantasies, Shame!
- come on man how forced can u get?

Sand by the luk of ur shit... and how short it was i thought u got slaughtered .. then i read it.. and good 2 see good ol' battle taktiks stil bein used like the spell it backwards shit

Vote - Duper Sand because alot of Mystiks shit was forced and even tho he had some punches & personals Sand beat him with flow and basic creativity in wordplay.. punches etc

good battle

yea i think mystik tried a little to hard on this 1.....

mystik came with a decent verse.....lacked punches.....

a little bit....but i think Sand got this 1....because.....

i felt his verse a little more...plus it was SHORT and SWEET.....

and thats what i like in a verse....so my vote goes....

to SAND......

yep..
pz....

Wow... Mystik... You Usually Drop A Way Better Verse Then This One... None Of Your Punches Really Hit... And Sand Just Beat You In Everything... Even Though I Didn't Like Either Verse... Sand Had Two Lines That Really Hit...

my flow can't even drown you. . .your styles already washed up

punchlines?. . . only teeth mystik seperated were on my zipper!

^Yup... That Took It... Vote-Sand.

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Sand is cool...but besideZ
that.... i think he took this
battle with superior puncheZ
mystikZ were forced..he forced
words to ryhme with his punZ
and it was BlAh.

vote- Sand

gotta say sand took this
surprised me...cos ive not really seen a dope battle from u
mystik yours was good...few nice punchlines in there and some personals
then i read sands...started off wack n thought he was going to get ripped...
then he pulled his shit together and won it with these punchlines

'my flow can't even drown you. . .your styles already washed up
and
'punchlines?. . . only teeth mystik seperated were on my zipper!



mystik yours just seemed to lack a cutting edge...
props for a good battle though

i disagree with most things said,

i think mystiks verse was superior, better structured, better

rhyming, more flow and more wordplay,

I honestly did'nt even realise sand's was a rhyme until the sixth

line. i though he was just trash talking before he dropped

vote mystik mind

^ i agree fully with com..
i also thought sand was droppin bullshit on purpose just so he wouldnt have to drop a verse until around 6 or 7 lines. it was badly structured, well not that badly but not as good as mystiks.
sands verse didnt have any punchlines i considered good enuf for him to take this. mystik had a bunch that were a little better than sands. next time both of you go harder.

WerD,
My thoughts exactly, sand came with a couple of good punches
But his verse was hella short, maybe if he had wrote a couple more punches like the last one his verse woulda been better.
Mystik had a nice verse, it was well structured, had some good punches and personals, and the flow was faultless.....

Therefore- Vote - Mystik Mind

^ you people are fucking idiots. ^


time to explain my 'not rhyming'
'shit talking' punches.

homo i guessed your the type that's gay
since i spell head whenever i type your name

how does that not rhyme fuckfaces? you idiots
and the punch. . . mystik mind. . . SPELL HEAD
you simple fucks.

the fight to fame? lyrics i'll have you school taught
besides, you don't spit hot, you drool raw *

drool raw, spell warlord backwards, evolve
discount these idiotic votes. i didn't even
rhyme? fuck that shit you fucking idiots

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