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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Im In... Gonna Have To Figure This Topic Out

^same for me, I didn't think of it, but it looked hard

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Life Is Played On A Big Foundation Of Strings
& When Luck Plucks.. Thats The Song It Sings
Whether Your Stuck In A Rut Living For Things
Or Struck w/ All The Good Fortune It Brings
So Often It Seems.. The Pitch Is Type Wild
Dont Walk From The Plate, Take It & Smile
Wait Till Its In Your Zone.. It Might Take You A While
& While You Wait On Your Own
Dont Keep Fate In Denial
Cause When Its Shown.. It Has The Face Of A Child
Its Intentions Are Pure.. In A Sense, Innocense Is Its Core
It Doesn't Hurt You On Purpose.. Its Purpose Is More
Of A Message Sent To Let You Know The Score
& Just When You Think You Know Whats In Store
It Sells Out Of The Product You Were Searchin For
Is It Worth It Or.. Will You Get Caught Napping
Called Out On Strikes, Acting Like It Didnt Happen
Ship's Going Down & Your The Strapped In Captain
A Black Hole Of Bad Actions Pulling You Back In
But That's When... You Raise Your Chin & Be Strong
Keep Trying On Your Violin & Get In Tune w/ The Song
Assume Your Wrong, Change The Actions & Words You Sing
Then Take That Bat.. & Bash The Foundation Of Strings

Point Being: Make Your Own Music.. Dont Let A Couple Of Bad Notes Ruin Your Symphony

pull the chords, yeah, the musical kind
request more, no, you'll never ever find
the same endeavor's mind, as we combined
the warning signs signalling our defeat
and the beat goes on, mezmerizingly neat
as the treat is gone, families speak leet
on weak seats, but they support our reps
take a few steps backwords, slowly adept
figuring out that of which you are bereft
petty theft, overshadowed by bad grammar
Majolnir inspires, so fly high the banner
pluck strings lovingly w/the Sacred hammer
out span her, and let the notes fly free
from sky to sea, echoing things that may be
for the you and the me, everything between
proceeds to lean, in the need of support
supplement music of life in double cohorts
with no forts to protect us from retorts
of imagination's contort, don't let it admire
or aspire to light fires on night wires
for the foundation rolls on over-tight tires
blight squires attempt to sever the strings
attack the moral things, riding on the wings
of time's eternity, these proverbial things
all rest on the weak foundation of strings

everything may trip and fall, but you must persevere
hear humanity's call, you leave, I will still be here
serve to sever my ear, Van Gogh understood the tips
find a balance in your life as the words leave my lips
foundations aren't strong, everthing may fall and trip

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

can i get in this league please?
nice battle, props, but as im not in i wont shpw opinions.

don't fucking freepost in my battle thread, herb. sign up like everyone else
-understatement

Can we get some fucking votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Evolve came nice in this actually, storytelling was decent, stuck to the topic nicely, clean flow etc, a little short but a lot of content in there, got a little shaky towards the end but nothing too major.

Maven came correct on this again, his flow was a little awkward to get into at first, but i caught on, again - nice storytelling, displayed the topic well, real consistent, a similar takes to Evo's actually i thought, there wasnt a lot in this, i think if Evo had made his piece a little longer and continued deeper into his piece, he would of took this, but as it stands, i fely Mavens grasped the topic a little more.

Vote - Maven

Close battle though. .

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Yeaaaaaa... one vote.... Yeaaaaaaaa!!!

^ vote on mine if you get time, our shits slept on too = /

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Alright, This battle, well was not what I expected from either person.....

Evolve, the short bar one sylable rhymes didnt really work for you here, the overall point was obvious,
and somewhat profound, but I've seen much better.
::So Often It Seems.. The Pitch Is Type Wild
Dont Walk From The Plate, Take It & Smile
Wait Till Its In Your Zone.. It Might Take You A While
& While You Wait On Your Own
Dont Keep Fate In Denial
Cause When Its Shown.. It Has The Face Of A Child//
^^^^^That was pretty ok,
Under AKA Mavin AKA Einstien
Same problem. this battle wasnt very strong....
:::::etty theft, overshadowed by bad grammar
Majolnir inspires, so fly high the banner
pluck strings lovingly w/the Sacred hammer
out span her, and let the notes fly free////

Overall I would have to say Evolve was more complete, Vote Evo

::Now go vote fair on my ish, FAIR seriously::

& Just When You Think You Know Whats In Store
It Sells Out Of The Product You Were Searchin For
Is It Worth It Or.. Will You Get Caught Napping
Called Out On Strikes, Acting Like It Didnt Happen
Ship's Going Down & Your The Strapped In Captain
A Black Hole Of Bad Actions Pulling You Back In
But That's When... You Raise Your Chin & Be Strong
Keep Trying On Your Violin & Get In Tune w/ The Song
Assume Your Wrong, Change The Actions & Words You Sing
Then Take That Bat.. & Bash The Foundation Of Strings

^ thats when u picked it up.... main part of ur verse i liked


Under...Flow was a lil Aghh At first..but u picked up at the end well...good vocab...n nice story telling...all around well rounded verse..and a good drop...and the ending the last line..a killer...i liked it alot....

my vote UNDER...mainly cuz evolve ended nice..but i didnt feal the start...if u kept it all like the ending u would have takin it...but nice drop also...this was close

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