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10-06-03, 05:39 AM
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Yung boys 1st rap, check it...
IP: 49CF CFE5
You n me homie, yo know that im the hardest/
you can't even compete with me n you call yourself an artist?/ You messin with wrong man, when you mess with 2 kwik/ Ya only skills is suckin ya own dick/ Im making the money homie you writing the checks/ Its cowards liek you that run when I flex/ IM natural with my flows, dont need no tips or drills/ I got you knees shakin like yo ass is taking pills/ I know you loved each otha, but you shoulda chocked ya motha/ Or choke yo pops for given you that 2 inch little brotha/ Im the illest, im the greatest, Im stated X rated/ IM 24 Karat n yo ass is jus plated/ |
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10-06-03, 05:49 AM
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BANNED - Cheating
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IP: 47F4 7493
Parapper the rapper is deeper than that... Well, you from ATL. Suppose I should expect those 'Big wheel', 'drugs an gats' rhymes... that last line is gross... no flow don't even flow with the rest of your so called first... an hopefully LAST post
(like that anyway) Work on everything... from flow to lyrics to vocab to structure... An before some dude in here attacks my ATL comment... please quote me some open minded... senseable... realistic... lyrics from someone from those sides... No dissrespect to anyone anyway... I'm jus sick of hearing the same ol' same ol' |
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10-06-03, 05:59 AM
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IP: 49CF CFE5
N u need to recognize a good flow when you see one, who u think u is talkin bout "well this don't go with this" man go some where else with that bullshit. You should be reading a book cept being on a rap board.
n u dis ATL, whodi u from London.... nuf' said |
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10-06-03, 06:04 AM
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IP: 103B C99E
ok, flow wasnt bad, vocab needs work, wordplay and multies and scheme need work...try spittin on a topic or something...you'll get better just keep dropping...
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10-06-03, 06:07 AM
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IP: 665D B34D
the flow was ok but there is alot to be improved...low vocab.....but u'll improve wit time......keep droppin...
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10-06-03, 08:53 AM
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IP: 6F9E F23B
he was aiight for a newbie, give him some slack............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................................
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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one! |
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10-06-03, 11:33 AM
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BANNED - Cheating
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IP: 47F4 7493
Yeah, London... It's not tea an crumputs up in here... Check some UK Rappers... Sure they ain't got the publicity... But trust, they do deserve it... Don't believe tha Hype. (Well, not all of it annyway)
I ain't mean to diss ATL, it's jus alot of Rap I hear from dem sides are all the same, giving me a right to be typical, espechailly when you prove my point wit your "kiwk dick" read some other posts an you'll soon get the inspiration you an alot of other ATL cats need |
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