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Yu Bin SunD | 5 | 62.50% | |
Tha Duce | 3 | 37.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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12-31-03, 02:56 AM | #1 | |
Duce I Rae
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Yu Bin SunD VS Tha Duce
IP: 7B8E 1254
10 -15 lines
no dr no hate drop it |
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12-31-03, 03:02 AM | #2 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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IP: 98BF F77F
check in 30mins to drop if u don't drop rite afta i drop in it's 2:00 am here due time 2:35 if u don't drop by then i'll make sure ur battle is lost hollaz and good luck
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12-31-03, 03:34 AM | #3 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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IP: 98BF F77F
Shawn Rainy Sorry This Is A Battle..Not A Contest Of Who Can Pleasure Dicks..(his aim)
My Skillz Like Broken Rulers..Son You Can't Measure It.. I'll Rape This Ass..And He Responded But Dawg I'm Already Soar.. I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age) You'll Never Get Air..Like This Bitch Is Lungless.. Only Thing That Should Come Out Your Mouth But God Forbid You..Should Be A Tounge Ring.. Like Spillin Cement Buckets..I Dump This Hard.. Everyone Is All Ova Ya Bars..Like Clumsy Kids On Monkey Bars.. When I'm Spittin These Bars You Besta Drop.. Cuz I'll Serve This Cat Faster Than Vietnamese Restaurants.. You Just Got A Mean Domestic Violence Of Rhymes N Ya Flows Been Abused... Cause Afta I Murk This Fuckin No Lifer I'll Chunk His Hoe A Big Duce...(his name) |
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12-31-03, 03:36 AM | #4 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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IP: 98BF F77F
u got 10 mins or this my ko hollaz .................................................. .................................................. ................................
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12-31-03, 03:39 AM | #5 | |
Duce I Rae
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IP: 7B8E 1254
what... Yu Bin SunD-ly Killed...skillz Unfullfilld//
Cat settin Deadlines.. dont he Know this is tha End-of-tha-line// Coveted battle title...only the victorious seek it/ While Bin shows up a pussy like Victoria's Secret // Notoriously dressin' in sequins, spittin' in a bitch's stance/ Don't know whether to battle you or unzip my pants// In court they asked for your depostition// claiming you and jackson were in tha action of Juxtaposition// but the secrets out... getting to heated an fussin.. No Confustion// Thermosetting Compositions.... and you wonder tha reaction// why do 6 year olds look at you wit physical attraction// wow Yu Bin SunD-ly rub'd into satifaction...you a Jackson?// If so fix your face bitch before I rape your moms with broken broomstick// fuck her in the ass with a spiked dick... an kodak the shit// an get off my dick.... an suck it till I break that fat lip// *NOTE* If you dont know all the words meaning look them up or Dont Vote... Plain and simple... good drop dawg good luck |
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12-31-03, 04:19 AM | #6 | |
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IP: B20F 67F7
lmao, dis battle was hilarious. You both had me laughin...but my vote goes to duce...I will explain why.
see...Yu Bin SunD...to me atleast, you were inconsistent and keep loosing momentum a lot. Now when rapping...if you have a good punch here, a crap one here, then a good one, it wont have the same effect as crap one-good one-good one. Understand what i'm saying...that is why I felt Tha Duce's punches hit harder...he was mroe consisent with delivering good ones. Even tho Tha Duce's punches were kinda sex lines...they were funny as hell. "Coveted battle title...only the victorious seek it/ While Bin shows up a pussy like Victoria's Secret // Notoriously dressin' in sequins, spittin' in a bitch's stance/ Don't know whether to battle you or unzip my pants//" I think those four bars right there won the battle...notice how they all are in a sequence...2 hard hitting bars in a row. I believe the other categories aren't necessarily worth breaking down since when one opponent clearly beats another in terms of punches and wit...it is pretty much a decided battle. You both did have sum strectched lines tho... "You'll Never Get Air..Like This Bitch Is Lungless.. Only Thing That Should Come Out Your Mouth But God Forbid You..Should Be A Tounge Ring.." Vote- tha duce return the favour by dropping honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank You. |
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12-31-03, 05:41 AM | #7 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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IP: 98BF F77F
uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............1
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12-31-03, 03:26 PM | #8 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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IP: F58F E32F
uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........2
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12-31-03, 03:41 PM | #9 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: 3944 7C5F
aight i know i cant poll vote, but heres my breakdown.........
flow-not availible in text structure-tie vocab-tha multis-tie metas-tha punches-yun personals-yun overall-yun fact is punches win battles and i was feelin yun bin sunds more........props to the both of ya, this was a tight battle........... I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress
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12-31-03, 04:41 PM | #10 |
swift chancellor
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IP: 84D9 2F7B
flow- Tha Duce edges this one out, his was beter when i rapped it
structure-tie, both emcees focused on punches it seems multis-tie, both pretty good metas- I think yun takes this with some good shit punches-yu's were good personals-yu's personal about him being 24 was really good, he takes this overall Vote-Yu
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12-31-03, 05:38 PM | #11 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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IP: A1C1 DCC8
uppin this shit ,................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........numero Tres
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12-31-03, 05:52 PM | #12 | |
Flyweight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
hmm interesting battle...
QUOTABLES: Yu Bin SunD Shawn Rainy Sorry This Is A Battle..Not A Contest Of Who Can Pleasure Dicks..(his aim) My Skillz Like Broken Rulers..Son You Can't Measure It.. that was the only line close to being original in ya whole verse, as it had a personal in it, as what ima say next might be a shock... im hoping that your just using loads of played lines in ya verse, but ive got a suspicion that youve been biting various lines from battles, cos all the rest of your lines have been played out since last year, and i know you didnt just happen to think of all them played lines at once... but based on the lyrics, too much played shit, lacked originality, this verse might have been tight 2 years ago when the line were original... Tha Duce nothing great from ya verse, like a quotable that stood out, but you had a consistant verse, some nice idea's but you didnt really flip them that well, they could of been a lot harder punches... i couldnt really dig ya rhyme scheme, as you had an on and off flow, and multi's just chucked in everywhere... but your content didnt suffer from it, so it didnt really matter for text battles... this is a hard battle to call... id give flow and maybe just edging out personals to Yu Bin SunD, but give originaliy and creativity of the whole verse to The Duce, as Yu Bin SunD had soooooo much played shit, i wouldnt even take it into account as his verse... a tough call, but i feel The Duce had this... Yu Bin SunD, you need to come with original idea's, not looking thru old battles and using lines you think are good, when the line has been donce once, or twice maximum, thats it, let it go... you really suffered, cos your whole verse was played lines, and just a couple lines that seemed directed at ya opponent... and dont reply in here bitching about acusing you of biting, cos i could easily find evidence to all them lines that are played, but you just wording it different, im well known for catching biters, so dont test me with that i dont know what im saying... |
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12-31-03, 06:19 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I have to go with duce yu had until I saw a few punchlines that masta ace used on his battle against boogieman on lyricist lounge underground.
Duce- Wins for not biting |
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12-31-03, 06:27 PM | #14 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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IP: A1C1 DCC8
wtf are ya talkin about lmao herbs always thinkin they vote rite jedi go get u some wins and posts and then come takl shit son till then sht the fuck up son
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12-31-03, 06:33 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 7E6A 9D1F
flow- Tha Duce was beter
multis- tie metas- Yu punches-Yu s were tighter and harder personals-The one about 24 was good which really added to me voting for him Vote - yu vote on this plz jus one more vote needed http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455 |
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