Ya mirrored reflection's tellin you lies...
Like women do when ya in between they thighs.
Talkin to ya soft, tellin ya what ya wanna hear...
Make ya think ya Superman when ya really hidin fear.
Showin you a mirage like a Vegas tour...
The image is soothing cuz that's what mirrors are for.
They don't show what's inside, just the outer shell...
But not a single person's lack of beauty ever sent them to hell.
It's what's in your heart that you need to control...
And it's what roams in your mind that make your heart cold.
Better your brain, or heal it if it's hurt...
Feed ya head with education or therapy if it's worse.
Do whatever ya can cuz if there's a God, he's sees...
And it ain't ya reflection that he's considering, G's.


It's about all of us, really.
Peace

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know wot ya sayin, like ya subject dawg, quite original

so im sayin .......UPPIN YA......PEACE

Oh yeah, check my latest spit, typed it as it came.....

NEED DA FEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the feedback, man...

I'll peep yours too.

Peace

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Yeah this was a good piece i thought, it was worth the read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece, your content was good, you had good vocab as well, topic was good, overall a good piece, keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83050

I'll peep it, C...

Thanks for liking my verse.

Peace

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Naw, naw, naw...

Ya'll give this a chance, peeps.

It's worth the look.

Peace

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^^nice....ur immagery was good, ....and ur flow supported it well, the vocab was ite, ...and some nice lines in here

But not a single person's lack of beauty ever sent them to hell.
It's what's in your heart that you need to control...
And it's what roams in your mind that make your heart cold.
Nice lines ........Props

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Thanks Thugz...

You rock, my man!

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