You know you can "acheive"
So why not "believe"
I know it may "decieve"
But you were ment to "recieve"

Your staring at all your "dreams"
But all you hear are "screams"
Trying to drown out all the "teams"
Pushing you self to "extremes"

Glory is at your "door"
But first you must go through the "war"
Once you get there you will "soar"
and people will see what you stand "for"


Just a lill something id share
*HOT ICE

i like the possitive message in this
4 me it was a little 2 simple
even though it works how it is
seemed very short due to it been simple
basic rhyming scheme contributes to that

keep posting

I feel you on that one Ice, to me it was very nice. Nice little short poem. Last 4 lines means a lot to people, or it should anyway.