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Old 10-03-03, 05:08 PM   #1
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eyyo, LSA mothafuckas im fueled like propane
niggas try to fuck wid me bu i sting like cocaine
im at a fuckin point where opium cant numb the pain
Im like X nigga ill put a fuckin whole in ur brain
ive spent a lot of time pushin dem drugs
dt fuck wid me unless u wanna get clapped by a thug
trees, O, Khat i have an obbsesion wid flowers
cuz they can get my bombed worse than the fuckin trade towers
if u dt buy I annoy u liek a date that dont shave
Then i Cop some E show up late at the rave
take chances wid me.. get shot in the face
take chances wid weed.. cuz my shit is laced
i keep the hazed glazed on the PCP
ill take a razor blade and chop ya E-Y-E
If ya wanna feel good boy i got some rocks
dt be scared cuz the way i cock them glocks
we got mad trees, malt liqour i have a party
mad ppl rollin b-40s laced wid bacardi
LSD, LSA, Mushrooms, Dex
i love the euphoria when im rollin on X
wehn i sip on some becks
suddenly i want sex
i got the E to fuck wid peoples heads and play a good trick
like a youngteen blonde wanting marlyn mansons dick
i got drugs that fuck wid ur head so bad
make u lookin 4 gold like u was sinbad
ill have a nigga rollin just like limp biskit
or have a nigga dissapointed cuz he dint wanna risk it
so u should no by now i do lots of drus
and have lots of thugs, who back me when shit get ruff
come to 1 my partys where ppl rollin on X
ud think u the best ud get lots of sex
and drugs, doh, homies whats lifes all about
pop a pill, drop a O nd im out

tha was my debut freestyle-- Drugs----- tell me what u think payce
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Old 10-03-03, 08:22 PM   #2
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come on sum1 reply
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Old 10-03-03, 08:25 PM   #3
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ummm wack wack wack
elivate, u had no flow, no meaning to this elivate
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Old 10-03-03, 08:34 PM   #4
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i dint mean reply from u ive seen ur shit u ct reply
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Old 10-03-03, 09:01 PM   #5
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Please give up rap
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Old 10-03-03, 09:30 PM   #6
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personally i don't take on this topic cuz drugs and thugs only wreck lives... but i will prop the flow, i don't think it was bad at all... i think you need to take more time to structure a verse, BUT if this WAS a free then i say mad skillz, boy, mad skillz

hey don't rhyme x and sex twice and oh yea...
Is this said in 2, 3 or 4 lines? cause it read really badly...

"i love the euphoria when im rollin on X
wehn i sip on some becks
suddenly i want sex"

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Old 10-04-03, 12:40 PM   #7
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iite note taken
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