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dreaming in a state
IP: 1BA6 D97B
Its your life
its more than a lie get away im so ashamed I will never be try to be its to hard your life not mine escape this horrid place in the mind im more than you got so far im ahead im running to fast more or less well im out of breath you got no class fuck off I hate you kick your ass you come back 12 of your friends seems like the end fuck this sucks just need a little luck dead as fuck coffins awaits eternal sleep feels so awake dreaming in a state of awake |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
this is wak.........................it was just not happening, why you not writin in lines its easier to follow, the structure is poor the wording is basic the flow wasn't there, i couldn't draw anythin positive from the whole drop, i can see that you are new, but come on, use some multiys, word play...................aight
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