aqua painted color tainted portrait of my decibels//
your my canvas, and my paintbrush voice wrecks hell//
dispel salvidor dali archery, ricocheting holes in harmony//
trapping all souls in my armory//
far see horizon, shape sizing, frame shifting paint lion//
pump harder then the heart of a miyan, vien busting titan//
im cancerous on the canvas, wrestling word painting champion//
stampeding stamping ramping taurus brawling battler messiah//
napalm breath, firearm shooting stars, im the artistic murderer//
burn ya up with with icicle incinerator churners//
make van gogh cough with multi-color termites//
rip his other ear with my artistic drum bass flights//
lightning vice grips on high cliffs with a pair of thunder tongs
camera tounge, my words are 10 frames of animation//
images epiliptic wrecking brains of those who think basic//
bring tazers to aquariums, and spread my wisdom//
sharp intelligence, drum the harp of ilibis//
hover on cloud 9, a rain spitting angel//
hell - no halo replaced by horns, rage all//
rage all tension, like 100 feet springs//
thrusting off space stations through saturns rings//
my patterns brings logical obstacles halting all thresholds//
origami folds on society nobles constructing human boats//
traveling across the river of souls//
word of warning, face off with me is a risk//
liturature needs paint fingers, and i got its fist//

uppin

this was ill,good vocab,good wordplay,this was clean it stayed on point,what ever tha point was,keep spittin.~1~

uppin

pretty good shit.. i wasnt really feelin dat topic
but ur flow was koo and ur vocab was aight
not much i think think of.. keep it up tho man

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excellent vocab, flow, alright structure. An overall nice piece, PROPS! Now hit my open mic up called "Agony."

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Yeah, I like that piece. Pretty cool style there and the vocab was damn good. I like the last bar and overall, I felt this shit. Good drop. Hit up my first ever piece in Open Mic: She's gone now...
Let me know what you think of my drop.

Laaate.

uppin

uppin this piece, i might turn this into an audio

Yo as i said on msn descrpiptive and very catchy vocab and wordplay,nice style of spit,good use of meta's and multies,good stuff.

Peace

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