Why is it all famous artists were just an ignoramus carcass
Lack of motivation leaves complications impacted on creed

Devestation is motivation to acheive your objectives
Laziness leads to death and your elective recedes
Greed is rejected and relieve whats expected of you
I burn sites so you all are left with infected views
Looking at two things cuz i was given two eyeballs
To look and conquer at anything that seen to bawl
I brawl in lost fights, Crawl cuz it stopped my height
Install pot to what you write so got complete fright
Speak flights like Im an airport schedule announcer
Motivation equals you've caught exceptional power
Only thing regrettable is aims are scoured to badly
And sadly most people stop and reminisce so glady
Now effort is casually done and actually is not there
No prevention of attention cuz peeps stop and stare
When Declared motivation..

You have insisted to persist in having momentum assist
You...Have the power now to make exemption of risks

damn dawg that was a pretty ill drop, the vocab and wordplay were great, the content and topic were both original, and the rhyme scheme was good, keep at it holmes that was tight.

peace.....

Yeah i agree..this was a good drop..i liked the way you opened it up and the way you finished it...your vocab was great i thought...the concept was pretty good...and i liked the content..all your lines seemed to flow well together as i read it...overall it was a good drop, keep dropping.

1 Werd^^ Dope

Original , complex, ...flow was there well structured , ....

Only thing regrettable is aims are scoured to badly
And sadly most people stop and reminisce so glady
Now effort is casually done and actually is not there
No prevention of attention cuz peeps stop and stare
When Declared motivation..

Damn ^nice nice nice

Props

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Fuck you

damn nice drop kid... your flow was on, and you vocab is
damn nice... I like the way you brought this piece in... you
had a reall nice opening playa... keep droppin...
check my drop dawg... its called "COMPLEXITY"

Geme a D.....Geme a O...Geme a P...Geme E...WHAT DOES IT SPELL


DOPEEEEEEE

good job kid...u elevated alotttt...nice vocab..flow..consept..opener n finisher
goo drop/....holla....

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Thanx

niiiice... some of your better shit 4 sure... mad vocab, some ok wordplay... the flow was good, different style from me, but i could tell it was there, you got an' angry sounding voice i think, if not, it would work better 4 this... i liked it... short as you said, but good... 1

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