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imma shoulda been aborted fetus blessed wit one skill
to rip cats chains and peels aint greedy though my whole click ill split ya dough smack ya hoe and ban ya flow from the dirdy where the fear don't show ya vest is useless these just words no need for guns you dudes herbs lyrical style stunted little dude eat ya greens and verbs and grow up ya lucked up just the load ya mom aint spit in a cup I'm seriously inclined to start callin out names damagin lames my verse hit ya temple blow out the back of ya brain you insane and ya posse some clowns seeing ya man bleed turn a turn ya smile to a frown Last edited by eatyastyle : 08-20-03 at 03:33 PM. |
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
^^^^^^^WACK^^^^^^^
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IP: C1DA C961
I'll break it down to ya
-------------------------------------------------------------------------- Your Flow was terrible(alot of shit didn't ryme) Even out your bars so it flows smoother Use a higher vocab (instead of ex. head, bread, dead) Most important of all keep practicing don't let the shit people say discourage you ~1~ |
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IP: 6D0E 69D5
My agreeances to Co yet again...
eatawhateva... hear this... try breaking your rhyme structure into a pattern... don't mean to say that you should stick to that pattern... naw jus rock between one flow scheme to the next... Ex. "I kick* beats(A), like I kick* nethers(B), I lick* teats(A), like I sport leathers(B)" do you see? ifin ya keep workin it...it would only get better... {Peace}
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