end of the world it seems~
ray light beams in my eyes~
i cant believe whats happenin~
im close to snappin~words is all i got left~
baffeleded threw all the fakes in this world~
R.I.P to my niggas my soldiers who fell off~
soft~cats tryin to pretend dey hard~
absurd~that i can only express my hate wit a word~
"killa"~im illa~but still~will~neva be da best MC-
in da indsutry~believe me~this shit isnt easy~
dropin dope verses~gettin hit wit lead left in hurses~
cerebral thoughts in my mind~
thinkin of struggles~leavin me in a bind~
tryin to put the pieces on the missin puzzles~
shit hurts me inside~
that i gotta put my pride~divide my hate~
spit it at fake~subside~i cant handle it~
this rap~if it was a game~i'd dismantle it~
channel my missin love~got merked to early~
sure-ly ill see u in the after life~
Rosa Rest in piece my love~u woulda been my wife~
but the automatic weapon~left u in static~
im still systmatic~but im frantic~every time i grab da mic~
i cant handle it~i love u more then love itself~
Gustavo our son is growin up~
with out a mother~Queen~what am i supposed to tell him~
ur mom was killed in a abttle and died in my eyes?

Iite this was kinda ok, ...u try to express, on a good way,...but u still need to work on ur, ...vocab,....and ur strucure, and use more complex lines, ..but this was ok,....but u need allot of elevation tho, ...but i think if u keep droppin , ..ull gettin there...


Pz

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