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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-08-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-10-03

The Winner Will Be The Heavy Weight Champ
The Light Weight Belt Will Be Up For Grabs Once The Winner
Is Decided...

Good Luck & Dont Come Half Assed

Checkin In.........................

Probably gonna go 10 but if you want we can go 20?

Lets go 16. That's always been my verse number. If you want a different number PM me but nothing over 16.

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Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

Nope 16 is fine.........................................

I need a day extension on verses. I won't be home tomorrow so there is no way I can drop a verse. But I will be around Saturday to drop it. Pz.

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

You Are Both Granted An Extension.... If You No Show You ARe Out

Sweet 16....

Yo, look here everyone at how I'm beating this homo
When I punch him he sees red like developing photos
You can't touch me, I'll always come out being doper
He's not a straight up fag, cuz he's usually bent over
If this rap shit doesn't work, then ya skills must hone
& remember you always have my knife to fall back on
Kid's a joke, I'll pimp this kid out to a mute Chinese lez
& Have him taking more shots to the mouth then Sky Lopez
Here we go again, Tak always slobs on all of the men
He didn't come outta the closet, his dad wouldn't let him in
I could stop right here, and let all his buddies ride.....
Right into the ass-whoopin, on the corner where he built his pride
Cuz that's the only way that you could've won the title bitch
If God created men equal, he took a lot away from Taktik
I'm done with this clown, did ripped a hole in this dude
Think about it..
me and evolve posted in this thread that's 2 people already doper then you

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

adee keay

Quotient, Axl Prose or whoever...I'll still beat you despite......
Seen my shit coming...and begged Evolve for an extra night!........
If you didn't know, he's Axl Prose, lettin' you know so...........
You don't vote for a guy who sends these kinds of secret photos..........
Forget protection of truth, I'm straight disecting this dude........
Seein he must of neglected the Half Assed section of rules!.......^^^
Combined with a library of names and pages of faulty text........
There's no question why, when he seen me, he renamed Always Less!.........
Ain't hard to see this cat's shit so pre-writ it's signed B-I-C!........
And he couldn't salvage a Double-U if stuttering between T-&-V!.........
Tired of the annoying youth thinkin' they got somethin' new......
Here...how bout I toss this Tux over this Cliff...Now Follow Suit!!!........
I'm on one site and you're on like 50, here comes the reflection......
This cat enroled himself in Art Lessons...still dont Draw Attention!!.......
Beware of the bones that break when you witness my shit and intake.......
Because I ain't even here for the win...just defining Heavy from Lightweight!!!.......

My vote goes to ripper man for creativity and that line about foor door fords....touched me in a way I've never been touched before....and that splintor finisher made me want to become a rapper, man....good structure....it was just missing a little get the fuck outta the LLL forum and your very wack foolio.....but other than that your going places

Yo, look here everyone at how I'm beating this homo
When I punch him he sees red like developing photos
weak opener...but decent wordplay
You can't touch me, I'll always come out being doper
He's not a straight up fag, cuz he's usually bent over
not really feelin this...i'mjust bein honest
If this rap shit doesn't work, then ya skills must hone
& remember you always have my knife to fall back on
not bad i guess...
Kid's a joke, I'll pimp this kid out to a mute Chinese lez
& Have him taking more shots to the mouth then Sky Lopez
decent
Here we go again, Tak always slobs on all of the men
He didn't come outta the closet, his dad wouldn't let him in
lol...i liked this one...good wordplay and punch
I could stop right here, and let all his buddies ride.....
Right into the ass-whoopin, on the corner where he built his pride
good
Cuz that's the only way that you could've won the title bitch
If God created men equal, he took a lot away from Taktik
feelin this one too
I'm done with this clown, did ripped a hole in this dude
Think about it..
me and evolve posted in this thread that's 2 people already doper then you
okay closer...


Quotient, Axl Prose or whoever...I'll still beat you despite......
Seen my shit coming...and begged Evolve for an extra night!........
nice opener
If you didn't know, he's Axl Prose, lettin' you know so...........
You don't vote for a guy who sends these kinds of secret photos..........
good personal
Forget protection of truth, I'm straight disecting this dude........
Seein he must of neglected the Half Assed section of rules!.......^^^
not bad...decent punch
Combined with a library of names and pages of faulty text........
There's no question why, when he seen me, he renamed Always Less!.........
nice play on his name...
Ain't hard to see this cat's shit so pre-writ it's signed B-I-C!........
And he couldn't salvage a Double-U if stuttering between T-&-V!.........
again..nice wordplay..good setup
Tired of the annoying youth thinkin' they got somethin' new......
Here...how bout I toss this Tux over this Cliff...Now Follow Suit!!!........
nice punch and wordplay
I'm on one site and you're on like 50, here comes the reflection......
This cat enroled himself in Art Lessons...still dont Draw Attention!!.......
good
Beware of the bones that break when you witness my shit and intake.......
Because I ain't even here for the win...just defining Heavy from Lightweight!!!.......
real nice closer



Quo...i think u underestimated this cat....Taktik came wit better
wordplay...punches...and threw some good personals in there...
ur verse was okay....had about 2 quotable punches in there...

vote=Taktik

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^You're so full of shit.

Blah. I saw this shit coming a mile away. I'd tell you nice battle Taktik. . but your verse was trash. Blah. *awaits the other 80% of RB to come in and ride Taktik into the sunset

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

Huh.............i had no beef with you..........come ride me?

I get no credit as a top battler..........so if anyone was to get rode it would be u...............and my verse was trash?

Probably was but after seeing you use fag lines the whole way thru i decided that i wouldnt have to come hard