Thin fine sheets of purgatory
by HAZY
my first piece that was ever posted aproximatly 21/2 years ago
Dedicated to Darneck, Dagyrlrmqble, Messiah, K.E.M, darksam, varentago, necromancer, DOPED,Young Rico, Ekwility, sickened virus, tyron10derfoot, ekwipped, lowd mowf, Infamous Joker, MAYHEM, kenya diggit, glazzciti, hyydro, saint-e/HIBE, bad n‘ flewence and my lil buddy Young Foul Mouth*if you've never heard of half of these people its because they were here before this board went through its several renewal phases......and I just felt like bringing their names back on the board....luv ya HAZY LADY

I blind myself with laughter

In an a time of mainstream madness...a pure second of complete and total sadness...determined souls seek an altitude of superior status::::
What I need now is an honest answer...a truthful deceit.......some form of relief to hide my anguish from this tear restraining defeat::::
A tidal wave of emotions.....destroying all that's seas...down deep to my hope of oceans......looking for the surf to cover my body in devotion::::
Need now some sweet revenge to get back now what I had then....once again...to finish the start and begin to end what never really began::::
Relief restricting tragedies fulfill my life....problems how you gonna solve them?...pressures how you gonna relive them......to justify you have to start all over again:::::
Tied down to the corners of this life while my tears fall to the south....my blood rushes to the west....when my voices is aimed north....pleading to the lord to do what's best:::::::
We laugh and smile and play our games of sweet denial...If we hold our breath...kneel right down and just repent...you cant tell
me what has came and what has went::::
although we live our lives....on different sides... we keep together you and I....live our lives stigmatized....incorporated both lives lived on lies.....when it crashes ...elaborated thesis.....its you and I that lay amidst in the pieces.::::::
your entitled to your lifestyle....but not your life....you get what is given but cant take what you want.....your handed your first breath and expected to cherish it from there on.......but you can’t truly appreciate that breath...till your last is gone:::::

uppin for ONE REPLY lmao

Darneck was...varentao was, is and will be...thanks for appreciating the difference, hazy...(just in case, i used to be darneck..to stop any possible confusion..)...


This was quite beautiful. The imagery and emotions were pure, and kind of innocent. Maybe that innocence comes with it being your first piece. Though i must say, for a first piece it was very good. It shows the basis of good writing talent.

The depths of which the piece went to was a joy to read. Using metaphors to good personal effect. The rawness of it bringing it home one way or the other. The reader doesn't have to dig. You could read this just as it is. And still appreciate it to an extent. But it also enables one to dig. And though the 'direction' of it could sometimes be confusing and lost (to which i relate). It still is there to dig into...

This first piece, as said above, shows the basis of a very good writer. And the further proof is in what you have done since this piece.

...resp....

i thank you and i remebered you were darneck but i wasnt sure if i had the name correct i thought at first it was darnick and i couldnt recall so i put in V to make sure lol

yuppers and thank you so much V

my 4ts 2 a 'T'
this was a very good piece u wrote here
alot better than my 1st piece anyway

keep posting