Hustlen the obscene faster then'a suns ray
Creating photosynthisis in my every day
Growing an stalling preparing to achieve
Grasping the american dream from a teen
God like mind a christian in my prime
Still get held back though all the time
Zoo's keep us caged in, whats earth?
The same thing? Better or worse?
Can't fully explain my thoughts today
If i did, it'd be a boneless x-ray
Water flowing, rainbows shine
Fogs blind, Rains god crying
Thunders surpreme, a holly beem
show theres hope to exscape this dream
Mentality showing i can only live in'a certine
Proximity behind a window wit'a curtine
Flowing lava of thoughts burning souls
Call me jesus, destiny i can control
Never follow the leader, im the teacher
Pluto's man..COLD, call me the preacher
Frozen like a photo, i sit an glance
Things will get better, if i take a chance

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

the most positive thing i can say is the flow was alright. thought the structure was a bit basic and the multi's were quite weak and the content didn't really do any thing for me.....All in all a weak drop.............peace!

but keep spittin

Yeah i agree...the flow was pretty good...But yeah everything else seemed kinda weak...just work on it and you will get it back...but it was ok for not doing it in awhile i guess...but keep at it...keep elevating...and keep dropping.

pop you are beyond this ......
i cant comment more .if you read you'll see.

how have you been gone...this shit was good
granted it wasnt top notch, it was still good
flow was your best point on here
good drop

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636