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Old 10-07-03, 03:23 AM   #1
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Words are weapons

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A nuclear bomb, only two inches long.
who would have ever thought it could cause to much harm?
The good and the bad in the same place;
definition of being two faced.
Laced with the grace is the only reason we survive as the human race.
Can you believe all the things that we do?
Honestly, think about it, the killer in me is the killer in you.
A concept of deceptive deceit.
And idea so deep, it makes you weak;
sweeps you off your feet, faintness overcomes and causes you to take a seat.
I repeat, as you get lost in your own thoughts.
Rewinding your past, wondering...did you cast lots?
Open your mind,
to the consequence of this ryhme.
Contemplate your past slate and the things that you do.
How many people did you kill...some you never even knew.
Outside appearances falsely condemn.
Superficial assumptions turn into sin.
Watch your every action and think before you do.
Don't let the killer in me, be the killer in you.
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Old 10-07-03, 11:27 AM   #2
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Words are Weapons... (and so much more)
(remix feat; Funn DementaLL)

(Using words as weapons)

People preaching nonviolence, shows us the power of dollarism/
broke and unemployed, wha I got to show for 16 years of wisdom/
Streotyped a criminal, 'I spit bars', I don't wanna live in em'/
Demons on their way home, an they want me to go with em'/
If I have to kill a thousand people for you to listen, so be it/
We made the world what it is... Infact we concieved it/
It's just, their's certain things I have to do before I leave it/
Coz I'ma Rock your world, an make fishes seasick/

(using words to inform)

I'ma set foot infront of the lines of an enemy/
I wanna see all convicts, in every CELL,
like COVERTING GLUCOSE TO ENERGY/
Understand, I don't hate the 'ROOTS', I hate the 'TREE'/
Coz I'm sure we were more civilised as chimpanzees/

(Using words to overpower)

Sticks brake bones... But words HURT TOO/
It's dark... oh so dark... I broke the heavens curfew/
If you manage to create an image, than my Words just cursed you/
My TERMS have value, my EXPRESSIONS are all true/
Labled a sinner/
Walk the WOOD an the BIG BAD WOLF wants my dinner/
rot in jail, losing body weight, growing thiner/
I'm not a loser... but even a loser is sometimes a winner/

(You can't handle the truth...)

an the truth is we all have African mothers/
In the WORDS of Malcom X
"We're a thousand and one different colours"/
I've found the LOST SOULS of our sisters... our brothers/
The globe is so cold, We-hate-each-other... (why?)
If the future is so bright, then why do I see no light/
myths are lies, an I bet the devils white/
So, why is our only hope our faith an belifes/
we need another 'negro revolution'...
lets smoke a PIPE in PEACE/

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Old 10-07-03, 11:47 AM   #3
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I felt to add to that coz plague L. reminds me of me.
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Old 10-07-03, 05:57 PM   #4
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yo u both was aight....improve ya vocab a bit an it would prolly elevate ya flow...
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Old 10-07-03, 06:32 PM   #5
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Yeah this was alright...try to even your lines out though, it makes it look better and flow a bit better...and try using some internals to help the flow out...but it flowed alright i thought...but it was pretty good..keep elevating...and keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84048
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Old 10-09-03, 06:36 AM   #6
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I just read my posted verse... An, Nah... did'nt like it... it was rushed an vocab was too simple compared to my usual work... Check it
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Old 10-10-03, 02:13 AM   #7
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Thanks for the feedback everyone! Everyday is a pressing battle, and an opportunity to grow. peace ~
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