either u want it or not/
there is no "i dont want a boyfriend, but i like u alot."/
bitches just playin with ur head/
alls i want is for u to gimmie head/
so go a-head, get to steppin/
fuck girls, they suck too much/
actually, thats ur problem, u dont suck enough/
just actin like u want it, just a bluff/
not wantin me to smoke, but thats how i roll/
blunts or bowls are aight with me/
im my own man, do what i damn well please/
me stop smokin trees? "BITCH PLEASE"/
ill stop if u get on ur knees n stop bein a tease/
n suck DEEZ nuts n let me bust a nut/
but nah, ud rather fuck with my mind/
how could i be so blind?/
but now im refined n back on my grind/
its ight, cuz ill be fine, i got my *buds* that are *kind*...~1~


this isnt all girls...just most lol....~1~

aight man, that was ok for a newb, ur flow fell off a little, u should make ur structure more complex by addin internal rhymes and/or multis. ur wordplay and vocab could use some elevation, and next time try to pick a topic not so played, but other than that u did ok. keep at it, u could do pretty good here.

peace......

Yeah i agree...this wasnt to bad for a newer member...it flowed ok, got off at some points i thought, but try to add some internals to strengthen the flow up...like it was said before vocab could be up'd some..but keep at it...and keep dropping.

ok, flow and structre needs work...vocab needs to be upped...could use some multies....keep droppin though you'll get better...

there is no "i dont want a boyfriend, but i like u alot."/

liked that line ^