lol@the singin...

beat is grimey...

I like you delivery...shit is nice as shit...

lyrics are proper...

your issue is...you need better breath control...
work on that...and quality..then you'll be set...

:sidenote:

dunno wtf was up with the beat skippin and shit...either that or someone did a horrible job of mixin the shit....cause damn...

anotha thing...-

neva do the singin shit...eva...again...

pz