yo, this is the first verse and hook to a track i'm doin' wit me, yung swoop.. an' i'm not sure pro'lly phil-e or sum-one..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/b...inmentmusic.htm

"Rhymin Under the Influence"

Special thanx to Art Writaz for hookin' up the beat

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i'm still uploading it... lol... you looked too soon

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I liked this track, The meaning behind lines did lack majorly

But... + < the positives is

This was a banging party track...I was feeling this and think it'd be dope when finished...The effects and mic control seemed really good regardless whether you were drunk or had smoke...

Either Way...I'm looking out for the full version... Up

thanx, i know... lol... there was no meaning at all,... i was under the influence.. ... good looks tho... 1

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hmmm....

yeah...you had to be a little under sumthin to make this...

the beat is...not nice...

sounds like a D12 reject beat...

nonetheless..it had me laughin...i still dunno why...lol

keep bulding...

lol, thanx, yea i've gotten that alot about the beat... 1..

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ok lol wierd track

good flow. kinda wierd but yeah its cool

really not much to say. i aint really feelin the beat. maybe you should try picking the beat when ya sober. lol but yeah its cool

flow is the best thing that shined on this. good delivery too.

but i wasnt really feelin the flava