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10-09-03, 03:58 PM
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The Painter gladiator
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The Invincible
I scribble paint invisible, spiritual poltergeist rhymer Artisitic ghost writer, the drifter mic tounge tier Im the horseback flame rider flied by the unicorn guider Ring-leader strider gladiator, Im da major arena life-taker Frequencies soars ground shakers, the sound barrier breaker Opponants get cut like tokens, bleeping forgive me Like old aged modems You cant compete with my band of broadband liquid swords You get tangled within my cables and locked within my fluid force Titan lion jaws, I clash horns with taurus with brute force torture I mute shit-talkers by drowning them in atlantis's deep waters Reappearing air-merging, transporting at high turbulance Turning the earths crust with my holy verse cursing I be the meta-physical person I take flight beyond the margin, I'll be bombarding The target on A4 with my brainstorm arsenal If my pen's empty, that means my thoughts are at full RoA - Reformation of Artistery Painting pictures with words Last edited by /:Ayura:\ : 10-09-03 at 04:50 PM. |
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10-09-03, 04:51 PM
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10-09-03, 05:34 PM
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nice
Structure was good,...and ur inner mesage was nice man , ...wit some hot vocab , combined wit a nice flow this was a decent drop  Props my homie.
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10-09-03, 05:51 PM
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thanx, stillin w8in for replies
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10-10-03, 02:52 AM
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I LIKED IT A LIL SHORT BUT STILL A GROOD DROP AND THE MESSAGE WAS THERE
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10-10-03, 03:39 AM
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True, the message really got across in this drop, shit was mos def hot. Keep it up and if you could PLEASE peep my new post " Wondering mind"...it would be most appreciated, 1
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*R.I.P* Jimmy L. , Louis L. , Aj R. , Tyler R. , Chris R., Dan W. , Matt F....... " You all will never be forgotten and your spirits live within us all!!! R.I.P*" " So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said "Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner." "Wether he is a sinner I do not know." :The man replied: "All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see" John 1x 24-26 |
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10-10-03, 10:57 AM
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thanx, kinda not feeling the one liner replys lol
upping this piece |
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10-10-03, 12:09 PM
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ok, flow was hot, structure was good, vocab was good, multies, again good...overall all it was a hot drop...everything was on point...nothing really bad to say about it...keep dropping...
o yea, if you get a chance. could you peep my latest open mic. i could use some more feedback. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83967 |
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10-10-03, 04:52 PM
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its iight to me, wasnt really feeling the whole concept, flow was on point, vocab was there, just aint feelin the concept
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10-10-03, 05:22 PM
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lol k
uppin |
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10-10-03, 05:36 PM
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nice
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10-10-03, 06:20 PM
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shit was tight...
short and sweet... maybe a bit too short... lol... vocab was strong here dawg... no doubt... strong, yet understandable... flow was descent... it could have been a bit better... I'm feeling your style man.... keep that shit coming... -1- |
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10-10-03, 06:37 PM
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thanx, uppin though
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10-10-03, 06:43 PM
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This Was Real Nice, Really Got A Message Across
Had Vocab, Structured Flow, It Was Really On Point I Like The Significance Of It Though, Keep It Up |
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10-11-03, 01:01 AM
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hey nice drop yo keep elevatin and postin i look forward to readin more
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