10 liens

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30 min blind post

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chec kinin
fuk a 100
characters shud be a Clean battle/////////////////////////////

NO DIK RYDIN
NO BEEF Votes
NO HATE VOTES
TU CENTZ CANT VOTE
that is all
pc

iight this is ma check in.....................

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both verses gotta b in by 10.........1

aite
10-15 lines
aite.
I keyed my verse a bit different
Dont Vote till u read both...


X I'm Leavin' ya frame full of CONTUSIONS after this lyrical INTRUSION, My lyrics should be against the law because I'm alphabet ABUSIN//1
I ripped your brain out and MISUSED-IT, then gave it bacc with BRUISES, I'm basically wastin all these bars jus to tell you that you LOSE-BITCH//2
You're gonna need a couple Canibus verses if you plan to AMOUNT-THIS, I'll sever a main vein, drain the blood, and drink it in OUNCES//3
WHAT'S-THIS, I'll grab ya head and SHOVE-IT down my MUSKET, Ya rhymes is soft as Charmin while mine are harder than an elephant's TUSK-IS//4
My lyrical MISSILES HIT-YOU quicker than cats in JUJITSU, I'm guranteed to RIP-YOU, SPLIT-YOU just because ya SHIT'S-BULL//5
Disgorgin acidic rhymes that leave you mentally SENSELESS, As the pain staggers on you're reduced to a weak DEFENSELESS APPRENTICE//6
WRECCIN CONTESTANTS with deadly WEAPONS while RECESSIN AGGRESSION, Heart ARRESTIN(cardiac) so you can't come with "shit" like INDIGESTION//7

Are you listenin', I'll rip ya ear"drums" out and make BEATS-WITH-IT, So dare to say my shit is wacc, and you'll be a DECEASED-CRITIC//8
Callin heads "pussy" when ya faggot ass practices GAY~SEX, WAGE~BETS? I done "came" on more cats than LATEX//9
I BLAZE~VETS, which you ain't, but you can get yo ass KICCED~TOO, Slit the wrists and rip out the spinal cord of this BITCH~FOOL//10

CLOSER
Rip ya eyes out their SOCCETS just for testin this PROPHET, I got this shit locced down so go find a lyrical "LOCCSMITH"//
All your attempts fail, you should know that you CAN'T-FUCC-WIT-ME, I'll 'decapitate ya legs' to secure the fact that you can't "STAND-UP-TO-ME"//

^And you though you were better tha me


Execution pleasse hit thisup honestly and I'll hit htis up honestly, even tho I hate This kid I dont Hate Vote, Ask Will Getcha

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=2


And GAME TITE, are u no showin in the battle I set up? Go check in and spit if you except

ok buddy u went over the bar limit but ill let it slide..............
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this kids Style Like Claustrophobic-Jail Cells Theres No Escape-My-Bars/
Leave him With More Flash Backs Than Dyslexic-Girls at Mardi Gras/
Lets Be Real, his Career Been In More Pits Than Bar-B-Q Grills/
u Couldnt Be Half As Tight As Me Like Virgin Midgets Ferris Wheels/
You arrive dead on the spot, trying to throw multies it's like faking a shot/
Your lines get rocked, my punches'll leave you with more holes than jamaican tank tops/
listen we could play follow the leader and you couldnt be ahead of me/
your like a premature birth, in battling you obtain the title of newbie/
You botched it, i'm all defensive the way your bars are getting blocked kid/
Boxing kids...you could catch illness from your dentist and still not floss it/

X Ecution Nice Fuckin Verse Dog, youve elivated since I beat u as Mob, We both Have

Anyway, Breakdown

PUnches: X
Multies: Game
Flow: X
Structure: X, i like it its like mine
Metas: Game
Wordplay: Game
Similes: X

Very Close, but X takes it with Awesum funny as hell punchlines


Nice shit, X Please hit this up wit an honest one cuz I know Game wont, tahnks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=2

^^ NAW KIDU HATIN ON ME IN EVERY FORUM I POST
FUK THAT
VOTE TAKEN AWAY

STILl 0-0
THIS KID HATES ONE ME
AN CALLS ME A Biter
FUK THAT X
HE WUD OF VOTED FOR U IF U PUT UP SHIT
uppin FOR HONEST VOtes

AN HOW many times u gunna post ya link fool i saw it already

Y fool then Drop a vote

And he beat you Fool, You had Preey nice Wrodplay and Mad Multies, Cool vocab too, But Im a punchline kid And that wins battles, He had mad metas and shit, this IS NOT a hate vote.
Go ask Will Getcha if I hate, I voted for him and suprised him, if i didnt he woulda said Hate like u are right now, Pussy, take the Loss

Peace, X hit that up please

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more votes............1

aight yo---game tite---nice flow, good wrdplay, good multi's--couple nice punches----xecution ok flow--ok punches mostly played shit---and that midget line is still?? to me that wasn't played just the concept was---ok structure too---overall ithink game tite took this he came harder tried more i think had sum creative disses--vote=game tite----

peep my battles in the sig yo--thanx--oneee

sure love the D/R vote................

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u da drydin king man
wut u talkni about
cas got beef wit me an he gave u da vote
i dont even no this kid that voted for me
but obviously he knows rap from garbage
X ucame aite but ya shit is a bunch of played an fake punches an personals
siimple as dat
Uppin for honest votes