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Old 10-10-03, 12:20 PM   #1
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...::Your The One::...

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I don't know whether you are the one?
Maybe a survey will help let me know?
You never will know when it has begun
But will..And you'll have total control


..AyYo..Yo..Yo..::Listen::..

Can you make even the darkest of sides glisten?
You able to take a broad perspective on decisions?
Is excision of suffering a revision thats buffering
Within you?Or giving peeps props when their due?
Or taking skewed ideas and making them elude
So clear..Are you a magaican when you conclude?
Dissapear pain in fueds and bring the best out?
Or kill the best so your death can't be vouched?
Do you say ouch or cry while your being hurt?
Can you stay calm in despair or are you bizzurk?
Do you have to exert others or commit suicide?
Are you able to have all of your spits purified?

.. You've already got your answers and answered correctly
Really? Yes all of your answers have been tampered directly
Hampered respectively by yourself so you don't self destruct
Your thinking your the best and no one can help your product
You've been dealt the luck to for your sucess never to digress
Or to be upset about results, you obsessed always to impress
Really? No 9/10 times these are implied but are juxstapositoin
You did and still are thinking you've securely stuck-provisions
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Old 10-10-03, 12:54 PM   #2
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a'ight, you had some sick flow on this, like my old style it seemed,... how the multis an' shit went together, it wasw near perfect, you've deffinately improved... you want me to help u on audios.. man, just start recordin' 'cause this shit flows, all u need to do is learn how to ride a beat.. 1

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Old 10-10-03, 01:08 PM   #3
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Dope work man. .
Everything about this was pretty much on point, the flow, imagery & some really decent detail.

Im able to collab now since I have finished my SS verse & verse for the crew collaboration. .
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Old 10-14-03, 06:52 AM   #4
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Old 10-14-03, 06:58 AM   #5
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I LIKED IT ALL DELIVERY MESSAGE POSITIVETY
PHILOSOPHICAL STAND POINT ALL WAS THERE TIGHT DROP FAM
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Old 10-14-03, 08:02 AM   #6
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Very nice flow!
Keep spittin
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