In The Making

In The Making.. I'm generating new progress for evolution
Never exacerbating elevating but too express retribution
Infest devolution, So I have momentum while I'm hitting
So easy to give up but aslong as i keep inventing writtens
I'm suspending in oblivion, it's better than knowing I failed
Keep working at it then I'll know that evolving is compelled
Resolving whats held< Thats all that people like us care for
While Potents fragility's in the making i can't declare im sure
Questions like.. Am i meant for the mic or am I really potent
Start re-analysing actions for compaction of components......


Prone to Evolution, mind of Solution & Intellegence,
learned to Speak with Ease, words, Embellish them.
Robotic figure, Designed Thoughts Were Triggered,
& The Soul of my Mind, Began the its thinking digger.
Reminded of Times of Nothing, but the Talent Seen,
realizing I had it, I used my Powers ever so Dynamicly.

Began to Expose true Emotions through deep Writing,
& made Sure every Word I Spoke Fit or I Kept Reciting.
Excepted that I Had Much to Learn for the Time Taken,
Writing for Me is A Passion but im a Process In The Making!

Dope!


Vocab,....flow,.......structure, it contained everything,...

Potent, the first ten lines, were tite, ....and Faze finished it damn good, ...

We own open mic , ....lol^

Props...

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that was pure illness u ripped it up vocab was great so was the wordplay and flow i loved it all hey return the favor and vote on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4487#post834487

this was a good ass open mic everything was on point in this piece vocab, structure, flow, wordplay it was all there. this was a nice flow. good shit.

holla at yo boi
~1~

that was a sikk drop...everything was just flowing you never had to stop when you were reading it...the tie in with the title at the end was hot too...nice work

keep it up

holla at mine "Rookie"

peace

that was dope
it had it all

Fellow Camarac Protegés Take It To the Next Level
(October 11th, RapBattles.com)
Together, Pot1ent & Faze - two of RB's most up and coming writers - constructed an almost legendary piece. Regardless of its accolades, it was a step ahead for the both of them.

Pot1ent constructed his best piece to date, wowing his audience with a perfectly-utilized arsenal of vocabulary and flawless flow. He had numerous quotable lines, including this sequence:


Faze, on the other hand, has adapted his style to one very similar to his mentor's. I was impressed by one particular sequence of lines:

certainly quotable. The only thing I would question was one particular aspect of Faze's piece, being this line:

I don't exactly understand the wording, I'd be glad if you could clarify it for me.

It looks like Cam has broadened his horizons even further - from battle king, to topical king, to budding audio head. . Now he's producing new writers to pass the symbolic torch of legends to. Faze one: completed.

(G. Hod - Associated Press)

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TY.. Up