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10-13-03, 01:55 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Orchestra (Brix style)
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http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=624252&q=hi LOFI http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=624252&q=lo Let me know what yall think...uno
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10-13-03, 02:21 PM | #2 | ||||||
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id change the kick...snare is off a little just after the crash....backround strings are ok not really feelin em tho...needs more change ups to stop it from being repetitive....overall decent
holla back http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85306 Pz |
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10-13-03, 03:02 PM | #3 | ||||||
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It was aight, I liked the strings or whatever that was, and I liked the crash symbals, but the snare after the crash was off beat... |
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10-14-03, 12:57 PM | #4 | |||||||
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^^^thanx alot...ill try to change it up a lil more....1
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10-14-03, 10:16 PM | #5 | |||||||
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sound straight, jus starts up a bit funny unless u ment for it to be that way, u know, after the drums wit the cymbals,
otherwise it's good........ |
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10-15-03, 02:51 AM | #6 | ||||
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noooooooooooo . . .
So close . . . yet so far . . The first 2 seconds my head was noddin and I was like "Oh shit" . . . then the crashes came in and it went horribly off beat. I know exactly what you did wrong. You shortened the measure by 1/8. There should be two more crashes then the loop should restart. Sick sample tho, hit me up on AIM I can show you what I mean. Theres mad potential in that sample. Count the snares in your beats as you play it, like "1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4" if you cant get thru 4 and back to 1 with out havin the same time between each number that should indicate that somethings wrong. Yours goes like 1, 2, 3, and where the 4th snare would hit it goes back to 1. Trust me you don't want your beat to go "1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3" unless you're makin a waltz or somethin . . .
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10-15-03, 12:06 PM | #7 | |||||||
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^^^^Thanx man...ill try to redo my beat to what you have told me...makes sense
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10-15-03, 02:36 PM | #8 | ||||||
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the sample is mad nice... yea its off beat a bit.. there is one more cymbal hit. dun dun dun dun - thats how it should go.. yours goes
dun dun dun then loop. just fix that. |
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10-15-03, 02:43 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: D935 AC08
yeah i agree.....
the beat doesnt make sence....i tried spittin to this and it messes me up strings and stuff are cool...........dont realy feel the kick...sounds dry...maybe soften it a tad with some reverb.....but try keep the puch... peace mate noz |
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10-15-03, 09:06 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: F290 B20A
yea i agree wit da rest, da snare after the cymbal was off.......wouldnt hurt to use a different snare too, wasnt feelin the snare u use
needs alot more work tho 1 |
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10-19-03, 05:24 PM | #11 | ||||||
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that wuz a slick track dawg -- that sample was set nicely and it flowed perfect --- the only thing that could be a bit better is the kick drum --- if ya could switch to a meatier thicker kick drum it would give it a much better edge --- but either way thats a nice track --- one
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10-19-03, 05:58 PM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 41D1 7343
umm wayyyy off beat with the placement of the instruments
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