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ShEpNeY_zAnY
When you find the girl of your dreams everything seems to be perfect..
But is it really worth it...its good for you but for the boo it may not be working..
You get that call at night and she tells u that were not meant to be..
You thought that u would be together for centuries..you were sent for me..
Your feelings are crushed..your self esteem is flushed…
Cause the girl u loved is gone for from your arms..but the pain hasn’t had enough..
You try to hold it back but the tears keep coming..suddenly u feel like nothing..
But the worst it yet to be coming..U don’t talk for days and u become depressed…
You think that’s theres nothing left..ur too stressed, u cant stay awake cause u haven’t had a day of rest..
Days come and you wake up wid ur life ripped apart..u wanna take away the pain..
So u end it by jabbin a knife in ur heart..looks wat the girls obtained…
She’s broken the heart of a young man with potential to go far with life..
He only wanted you as his wife…she still liked him too he made the world for you..
See its bad, relationships aint right…now do u realise jus wat gurls can do..
They don’t bring pleasure they jus came to be hurting you…then deserting you..

But whats really died?

Dezyir
Friends smile when they clown, but inside they cant hide their frowns
shes forever faithful.. i know that napping in a ball is the only time shell sleep around
from the tank-top to evening gown.. she makes anything look better
only time i turn heads is when im with her..'is she REALLY with Eddie Vedder?'
XoXoX, thats how she signs every letter.. with modified Roman Numerals
'thats how many years well be together'.. the X is 10, the o 's are zeros
any fear? no.. constantly making love.. the man in me will always stay
that why i say 'fuck you assholes...whens the last time any of you got laid'?
the icing on my cake.. i want children.. i know its her I will always want to be with
but its a 3-step process..1.meet her, 2.marriage 3. THEN have kids


will i ever meet her? who knows...

*Dezyir says*
even if my girl came..
she would eventually leave..
cause they all do..
yes you are happy for awhile..

but it ends..

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yooooo
this was exactly what me and masta c TRIED to do... ya did it better
the flow was good for both but i liked Sheps more... vocab was kinda lacking but it was still good

if ya would be so kind (me and masta c...)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82007

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Wow nice....Perfect................................... .................................................. ......................

^^dont say too much lol


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i liked it everything ya'll said is true really good vocab for this kinda flow so keep droppin........................................... .........

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this is gonna be my last upp

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