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no prizes for guessing the beat i used. this is just something i wrote about 4 hours ago. enjoy.
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=609957&q=Hi http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=609957&q=Lo blah. replied to postman and SKOE Last edited by Johnny 6-feet : 10-06-03 at 05:53 AM. |
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^^uppin for non-bullshit, constructive replies^^
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You really need to elavate.............................
truely, I don't think your flow and voice are rap.......it sounds like your talkin to a mate in a silly voice.........all for reppin UK and all , but listen to some UK rap and get the concepts or summit...........................your flow's wrong, voice awful and you need to study your lyrics and ask yourself what's goin on.............no beef or nothin but you ain't that good.......you say on soundclick it took ya 3 or 4 years to get any good?.....what was ya doin in those 3 years?
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i agree...
you need some practice with timing... ya voice is rather flat..so i advize doubling up to give it better stability on the beat... lyrically...nice... but it doesn't mean much unless ya flow can carry it strongly... keep building... |
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nah, your alrite............................................ .....
check my soundclick comin soon
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