i rip rhymes serious, flows delerious, got rappers fear-n-us, its mysterious
how this light-weight comes through and lifts the bricks (heavy weights)
while you use the gun clips, i kill with wordplays-n-tricks
when i challenge its "batter up" like i was the 'tics
spottin my jersey everywhere like hardwood classics
im that well known, i'll make hits, i'll new york yank-ya
come around and step all over your home base just to thank ya
but i can bet, the game aint over yet
if you get out cho seat it better be for the 7th inning stretch
but i aint gotta strain myself, dont need no help
rhymes so hot, its makes the sun melt
make sure my rath's felt - its a risky business
but ill be sikk like an illness, with god as my witness
when i kill, its with my words, but not in self defence
cuz im always the agressor, rhymes stay immense
when all the rest are just pee wee, minus the hermon
battle me and your name will be in your churches next sermon
"why does that good ol veteran rapper have to be dead?"
cuz it was easy for easy to put a word bullet in his head

uppin

good read, the voicab was simpole but i think it made up for it how it flowed, good drop try and elavate your vocab and multies though it make it more interesting and more complex peace

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it was aite i got into the flow but the vocab was simple .. some of the metas were okay.. a short peice but not a bad one, ya had okay wordplay and it was on topic all the way through an aite read id give it 6/10 overall.. keep it real and keep elevating

Yeah i agree it was a pretty good drop...it flowed pretty well i thought through out the piece as i read through it...your vocab could be up'd a little bit...you had wordplay in there...also had some multies...I liked reading this one, it was good..keep at it...and keep dropping.

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