14 lines max
due by 1:30
no hate crew d/r or any of those whack shit votes
no quoting votes...explain well

no feeding n all that...

I'll keep my mouth shut, His sig says only speak when spoken to,
Cuz his spits is in 1 ear n out the other...Your whackness i'm immune,
You sound scratchy, Wit more break ups than J Lo,
You wouldn't be good in this battle...Even if ya wore the Halo,
Game Ova! You lose I win, Let's just call it a truce,
Ya right, I'll sack this bitch as if my alias was Smith, Bruce,
Hit you wit a duece, cuz you'll never be around a 1,
Your fallin behind, Like all battles you contain L's istead of won's,
Askin 21 qeustions, I'm not relatin to 50 but Curious George,
They say you'sa a dick but you a pussy to me...We're unsure!
Kid is like a Juice Box drink, Only half of him is pure,
Your shit kid, N the other half stinks...So i take it your manure!
Only when ya asked to battle genorously...Is when ya Pleased me,
I'm livin in Harmony, Hard like Bone, It equals to me takin this E-Z

^^^ain't that bad. nice punches........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

IIGHT Dawg..ur outta ur league HEre WE GO FIREEE!!!


Your 75% record, is it supposed to be intimidatin? now i peeped and im angered, spits slash to penetrate in/
Till your read my verse and start hypervenalatin/

Im hard wit titanium flows, tactical blows, and hi yes im happy to kno/
That wins in the southern direction, will forever blow/

BITCHERY:
talkin third person, faggot u best.....get ya men-straight/
only reason u even stepped to me because, cuz right now u menstrate/

Its gametime, faggot b4 i spit u come blow the god/
After this u stay pissed and sayin nuttin, like AP was a mod, And u said no feedin cuz u kno u bite more, than a bad blow job/

no personals, the only shit u find on me is from ur own spit/
Curious bitch! he feelin ma verse liked he fingered himself wit ma pen chrome tip/

OWNED:
APadvanced placement, due to over the top stimulatin statements/
Hi My Name is name is simulatin Flakness/

Ima slap you around, then let your face go/
Cuz no ones feelin ya hi, like u forgot........and turned the bass low/

BReakdown of meanings
4th-5th line means :Wins=Winds Souther direction i went under him!

and last line im not sure about the spellin but u kno bass like treble and shit
if ur not a newb excuse this

IIGHT UPPIN NUMBA !1111111111111111111 hit this and leave ur own links lets go yalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

aprentice kid took this battle. hi my name is a lil bit of elevation is needed before u take on someone of this level. u had a nice verse and all but aprentice's verse was just too strong. aprentice had better flow structure creativity wordplay and punches. big ups to both.

my vote=aprenticekid

hit dis wit a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84883

Punches: Apprentice
Flow: Hi
Structure: Hi
Personals: Both i think, not really
Metas/Similes: Apprentice
Vocab: Apprentice

Apprentice takes it wit his vocab basically, other dude was basic

Apprentice U must hit this up wit an honest one for this honest Vote...........thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85248

fuckin newbie kids... punches n personals win a battle
if this was in elite i'd have the win...
SO GET OFF MY NUTS YA FUCKIN SQUIRRELS

lol... can we get any real voters?

^^^^^^nice battle i'll drop a vote if its still open when i get 100 posts
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hi my name is- like stated above^, you should prolly elevate a lil,
before takin on someone who is a vet...
but you spit a decent verse... would have beat a lot of people on
here, but not in elite front lines...

Kid- nice shit, your flow was on, hit em wit some good punches, and had some good wordplay... took this easy dawg...

vote- apprenticekid

LIsten Hi My Name Is....if u think u won go post it in I.R. or sumin....if u want elite votes then go leave ur link in elite other wise shut the fuck up and sop swayin u lil herb........UPPINN 22222222222222222222222222

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0851#post840851

^^
Drop an honest vote and I'll return the favor here wit an honest vote.

Vote Hi My name is

A.T your wack.........and apprentice is not a vet..............his verse was horrible..........the only thing he had was flow and wordplay...........his punches were soft and no personals............

My name is........you had a good verse.....with some solid punches and personals.....work on your flow..........that would help your verse..........

Vets dont let My name is get dicked...........cuz he definetly won