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Old 10-11-03, 04:04 AM   #1
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peep my shit........

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tell me wut you think..........




feedback is wanted..........be honest.......


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Old 10-14-03, 12:11 AM   #3
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top of the page bitch..............


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Old 10-14-03, 12:15 AM   #4
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you choose good beats

you pretty good, could be a little more polished in terms of maybe sounding more into it and hitting every ad-lib perfect and shit... (maybe make em a little softer)

but was good
you can flow
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Old 10-14-03, 12:31 AM   #5
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thanks for the feedback bro........

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Old 10-14-03, 01:40 AM   #6
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Old 10-15-03, 08:29 AM   #7
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Yo, nice tracks, a lil feedback~>you get monotone in the intro of yo shit, need more emotion and ad libs need to be on point, its good all around, but you can be tighter, and i agree wit yung, about making whole songs, this is just lil snippets of battle verses,,

~Rhymes~, check my shit let me know wat you think,




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