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Old 10-17-03, 04:15 AM   #1
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the world is in silence...no sound from the gunslinger twirlin' his iron...
nothing is heard... no singing of birdz in the morning when my girl has been cryin'...
no more kidz freestyle rhymin' outside the corner store...
no more rock starz...no cd'z...and definately no more tourz...
no computer netceez who keep on claimin' they the shit...
no more gangsta rappaz who be steppin' on stage with razorz gripped...
no hate crimez...no thug life...no braggin' about sellin' frugz on the block...
no more social propaganda claimin' that the realest thugz are the cops...
no flows...no showz...no more groupiez and sluts...
no more drama...no action...there will be no moviez and such...
it's a quiet world after all...a lot of educated people in school can't pay they tuition...
look around at the city and all I see is a bunch of jobless musicianz...
some people sneak around with rhymepadz that are ever cautiously read...
all I can say is that...without music...I would probably be dead...
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Old 10-17-03, 08:43 AM   #2
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I was feelin the topic and how you touched it... Enjoyed mad shit you said..

you Fucking Aced This.. Keep doing your thing -1
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Old 10-17-03, 11:05 AM   #3
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i liked the structure, thought it got the message across well, good to see variety in a person......another ill drop......keep it up...aight!.....see ya
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Old 10-17-03, 05:40 PM   #4
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Hey I wrote that and read it to you to see what you thought and YOU JACKED IT FROM ME!!!

Naw j/p fam

That was deep, you put alot of thought into it. It is well structured and the flow is nice PLUS you actually have a point there lol...I wouldn't change or add anything to this it's a good drop stay active ONE+
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Old 10-17-03, 10:23 PM   #5
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now that ive had to lose the N. off my name, i thought id say again, good drop, keep it up....see ya!
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Old 10-18-03, 03:39 AM   #6
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^^^LMAO!!!!!! Damn...1 letter can mean a world of difference in a name...
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