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Old 10-16-03, 03:44 AM   #1
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Omens Pre: Blaspomy Of Harmony

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IN THE LAST DAYS OF THE HOLY WARS ANGELS FELL FROM THE SKY IN THE FORM OF BLOOD MIXED IN GODS TEARS.THESE TEARS FLOODED THE SOIL ,EVENTUALLY THOSE RAIN FALLS WOULD LOOSE THE RED PIGMENT AND AQUIRE THE CLERITY OF TRANSPERANCY FOR GOD WANTED HIS PAIN SEEN NOT.
SATANS MINIONS RETURNED TO THEIR TORTUREST DOMINION IN FEAR OF DROWNING IN THEIR ENEMIES WRATH.
THE WORLD WAS IN APOCOLYPSE GOD HAD FAILED IN SENDING HIS CHILD TO BARE WARNING SO INSTEAD HE WOULD SEND ONE WHO WOULD Eradicate AND PERSICUTE HIS ENEMIES.
SINCE EVERY THING IN LIFE FALLOWS A harmony TO BREAK THE RHYTHM IS TO ASSASINATE ITS CHARACTER.SO TO TAKE YOUR ENEMIES RHYTHM OF LIFE YOU MUST CRUSH HIS HEART AND MIND.
THIS REAPER WOULD BE CHRISTS’ REVENGE TO JUDIS MIND.ASLAYER OF FOUL MEN.
THIS ICONACLAST WOULD BE THE ANTONYMN TO THE ANTICHRIST……..
AND HIS NAME IS………………………

NONCENTZ the human index infinently supplied-
With way to define murder to those who defied-
Certified to kill lines…. with grammer and verbify-
the manner…..by which enemies get crucified.
The judge and the jurist-with a grudge on the judist-
There’s a million ways to die but over a billion ways I do it-
an unclonable cause of death. featuring himself on his duets-
show you 2 sides- of the story are homicide or suicide.
So choose …at this rate you either have lost or will loose-
The same words you use are the same I hang you by in a nuse.
Utilizing verbs minimizing herbs to weak factors-
Im an M.C. of another kind cause I M~assacre C~haracters.
My purpose…. was to eliminate these worthless insolence-
Reincarnate them then incinerate them like inscence.
I’ll die after my mission-until then no intermission-
CUMing down on you like the Missionary Position.
I can break your beaf down by nutritional fact-
Your tracks the diet version of rap your 99% minus the phat.
Is it that simple?
nah shit gets deeper-when the verse is done I’ll hit sleepers-
with HOOKs that resemble the SICKLE as the GRIM REAPERS.
Use consinents constant in my lyrical content…..
Make ub~noc~sious rappers nauseous-Get on they nerves….
pound words in and out the subconscious- until till their unconscious.
take any letter in the aeromaic alphabet … rip it to a metaphor-
Split 2 c’s(seas) and drown you between the canabalist carnivore.
That’s why tyou lyrical suicide more-cause they rhymes a bore-
I got narcalepts usen my scriptures to cure their snores.
After 40 days and 40 nights-ive fasted GROWING apettitte-
eat and m.c.’s life- when I RAISE a mic.
I am an icon with mic on cause I blessith-.
celebrate your death in bars by the time I spit the 7th.
Want a suggestion repeant for your writes-
hold off on rap till your next life.
And don’t try to steal my perception if you cant take advice.
Liyrically im the apostle ghostwriter no body can see-
Make any m.c.’s hottest quotable……
“I got ripped by M.K.C.”

HOOK EXERTS FROM CHRISTOPHER WALKIN OFF THE PROPHECY 3
AND AL PACHINO ON THE DEVILS ADVACATE................

HE IS A HYPOCRITE HE IS A SINNER HE IS A SADIST.... WORSHIP THAT?????? NEVER!!!!!!!!


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Old 10-16-03, 04:27 AM   #2
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This had alot of strong views and points which added to the force in which I read it. The flow and vocab all suited this piece well and you ability to stay and topic and showed here. The structure was better but theres room for improvement. Also this topic has been done many of times. Try thinking of more original topics but some original views on this topic was shown.

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Old 10-16-03, 05:37 AM   #3
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how is it played i never herd a song aboute being heavens bringer of death utilizing the music with it?????????
damn i thought i had an original idea............
tell me who has done i want to compare!!!!!!!!
thank you for feed back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 10-16-03, 07:35 AM   #4
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ya vocab and flow were on point as they alwayz are...and I see ya structure has really improved a LOT...and I thought this topic was original...I ain't never heard it before...but maybe pot1ent has...but the content in this shit was just sickness dunny...
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Old 10-16-03, 10:10 AM   #5
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uppin
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Old 10-16-03, 11:58 AM   #6
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nice drop, like K.O.T said, flow and vocab was on point...
and I havent heard of this particular subject, but thats just me.

whenever your up for a collab wit me, just pm me a subject...
and Ill drop you a spit, shouldnt take me too long...
but nice drop here dunny,
~Ashy~
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Old 10-16-03, 12:37 PM   #7
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hit me up
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Old 10-16-03, 01:00 PM   #8
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Um.. I can't remember who done this exact same topic.. but something along the same lines.. Damn.. Don't take no offence.. I was only voicing my opinion on this piece.. I mean I had to give something negative for you too work on.. Obviously you thought this was completely orginal < Good for you

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Old 10-17-03, 01:11 AM   #9
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