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Old 10-16-03, 03:15 PM   #1
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To Dance Is Divine PT 1

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To dance is divine darling it is foreplay to sexual climax
The sun has gone down bandido so pull me next to ya fine ass
Do you know how much lust I have for you right now
Theres nowhere else I'd rather be so turn the lights down
Are you in the mood for this then turn up the volume more
Shake a leg salsa style what won't we do on the ballroom floor
And we'll just Uh breathe and stop best believe I'm hot
Stay with me the whole evening papi sexi leave me not
Let's not talk I don't want to disturb the way we freaking
I'm letting my hair down I'm officially off the deep end
Get a good hold on me as we display definitive passion
We'll try out new body movements engage in primitive action
Groove as one soul in synchronized back and forth motion
Doesn't take very long to get it heated I love how u flow son
Don't be shy because any desire to show me affections fine
Where'd you learn that daddy will you do it a second time
I feast on the beauty of our rhythm we step with finesse
You have heightened my appetite for my interest in sex
Pull me closer and we'll arrive at ecstacy shift to high gear
To dance is divine it brings blissful satisfaction my dear......
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Old 10-16-03, 05:03 PM   #2
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I feast on the beauty of our rhythm we step with finesse
You have heightened my appetite for my interest in sex

lol......... good line......but all in all good flow, you sound like you know wot you talkin about..........
.................aight...................peace!!!
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Old 10-16-03, 05:09 PM   #3
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lol that was tight
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Old 10-16-03, 05:20 PM   #4
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i thought this piece was tight, ive done a piece like this before, you had good imagery, tight vocab, liked tha message, you laid it out well, you should do a collab with me, we could wreck a piece like this before, i like ya style though, keep droppin baby girl.~1~
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Old 10-17-03, 05:06 PM   #5
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Thanks for the feedbackand Diverse we can collab just pm me a topic or scenario or whatever

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