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Old 10-18-03, 01:48 PM   #1
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...::Inequity Values::...

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Gamblers show youngens that someone can cheat costs
They will want to shine but they'll end up with cheap gloss
Heats lost and soon all they'll be left with is a tinted glow
Soon to believe if they've peppermints they've minted flow
Glinted cold..B'cos values are mixed up to that of reality
If you pay with counterfit values it detracts from vanity
Its stashed in cavities cuz it's never started building ontop
There fowarding to deduct and never is it yeilding to stop
Squelling to cops..Cuz your pigging out on junks of justice
Exploitation of dedication helps you have blunt productives
Cunts seductive.. So some males become pussy and crack
There math is lateral.. But isn't compatible to cushy cash
They're paying it back more times over than someone dead
Or algerbra equations..Cheating gets youa gun to the head
Its an invasion of cloned soliders thats getting more colder..
Than the end of world war 2.. But its active in poor bawlers
They stand taller than twin towers but will be brung down
They've no balls.. But we have to make them hung clowns


Don't derrange values through exchange..
Keep It real and don't let shook reveal..
You will get peeled..
Don't go opposing hard work and cheating..
It shows in scars & scars hurt while beefing..
Have to stop competing..
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Old 10-18-03, 02:29 PM   #2
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thought this was a decent read, most of it had good flow, but i think it went off a couple of times\/

[Or algerbra equations..Cheating gets youa gun to the head
Its an invasion of cloned soliders thats getting more colder..
Than the end of world war 2.. But its active in poor bawlers]

the vocab was good and overall i thought it was well put together.....keep droppin
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Old 10-18-03, 03:53 PM   #3
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good drop, nice simple flow, good vocab, try and use a few more multis, i liked the way u set it out,

my fav bit:

Glinted cold..B'cos values are mixed up to that of reality
If you pay with counterfit values it detracts from vanity
Its stashed in cavities cuz it's never started building ontop
There fowarding to deduct and never is it yeilding to stop

overall good drop, ill look out for more of your stuff,

return the favour and check out my Gladiator piece, its somewhere on the front page,

peace
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