have spit in a long time so here go.


Look through my eyes, and see a vision//
this isn't my life, its my intermission//
feelin pain and strife, but i stay wishin//
that the beef could die, but it stay sticken//
this is why, my nine millimeter stay clicken//
and all the hoes stay tricken//
ima be holdin it down, but im takin a licken//
everyday frown, this is how shit flows in my town//
round and round, dealin wid these clowns//
screams of lil kids I know you hearin these sounds//
shit that i did, that i never shoulda did//
now im payin the bid for livin sin//
this isn't the way ta win, my lifes lookin grim//
the sun that was bright has now turned dim//
someone turned out the lights and now i know ill neva win//
I lost this fight, now my life can really begin//

uppin for replies

big ups on the flow, i like it......

Look through my eyes, and see a vision//
this isn't my life, its my intermission//
feelin pain and strife, but i stay wishin//
that the beef could die, but it stay sticken//

nice...........................keep spittin.......aight...peace!!!

yea your flow was the best aspect of this
Your vocab was good too but the word choice was so/s
overall good drop

if you would be so kind
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