She's been slain, her body lay limp without motion/
I see her now in my memory.../
As her body surfaces from the depths of the ocean/
Her face scarred, her body black and blue/
What the fuck did she do to deserve this/
Please God, tell me why her life is through/


I'm seeking retribution for the sins I never commited/
Looking up to the heavens now with open arms/
'Cause I feel like I need to be forgiven/
Forced to live this life, a life without you/
It's a life that's not worth living/
But, it seems to me I've taken more from this relationship than all the things that I have given/
But, who's to say/ Who can decide what it is and how we feel/
The matter of fact is I can't get you back/
I can't believe this is real(cause you've gone away)/
No matter what I do, no matter what I say/
Nothing's left of you but a memory/
I keep telling myself this cannot be/
'cause the end of you will be the end of me/


Now you're gone. I'm all alone. In a world that's so cold. This life to me, is misery. In a world that's so cold. I never realized. But, it was in your eyes. I'm the reason that you're gone. Yes, it's true. I wasn't true to you. But, that doesn't mean I didn't try. No matter what I say, you've gone away, and I can't bear to say goodbye.

I was taking you for granted, and now I know I'll never forget it/
I never did let you know, or let my feelings show/
'Cause I was to stubborn to admit it/
Affraid to say, "you take my breath away"/
Would things have turned out differently if I had did it/
But, it seems to me like a fantasy/
'Cause in reality I don't get it/
But, who's to say/
Who can decide what it is and how we feel/
The matter of fact is I can't get you back/
I can't believe this is real(cause you've gone away)/
No matter what I do, no matter what I say/
Nothing's left of you but a memory/
I keep telling myself this cannot be/
'cause the end of you will be the end of me/


Now you're gone. I'm all alone. In a world that's so cold. This life to me, is misery. In a world that's so cold. I never realized. But, it was in your eyes. I'm the reason that you're gone. Yes, it's true. I wasn't true to you. But, that doesn't mean I didn't try. No matter what I say, you've gone away, and I can't bear to say goodbye.

She's been slain, her body lay limp without motion/
I see her now in my memory.../
As her body surfaces from the depths of the ocean/
Her face scarred, her body black and blue/
What the fuck did she do to deserve this/
Please God, tell me why her life is through/


It's been two weeks since the day you passed away/
You're family was hosting your funeral today/
I wished your family the best, and told them everything would be OK/
Other than that, there wasn't much that I could say/
As I turned to leave, your mother was asking me to stay/
She handed me a letter, and then this is what she said/
"You killed her mother fucker! Thanks to you my daughter's dead!"/
As she walked away crying, I opened up the note/
It was a sucide letter, and these were the words you wrote/


"(Spoken in female)Why did you lie to me you asshole?! I thought we were going to be together forever. I thought we'd share so much together. You said we'd always be there for each other. It turns out you truely love another. I can't believe I trusted you! Fuck you and that fucking bitch too! Without you in my life, I don't know what I'm gonna do. Yes, I do... I'm gonna kill myself. My life is through! I hope you're happy with what you've done. I hope all the games you played were fun while you were fucking with my head. Now you have to live with the fact you're the fucking reason why I'm dead! See you in hell..."

Now you're gone. I'm all alone. In a world that's so cold. This life to me, is misery. In a world that's so cold. I never realized. But, it was in your eyes. I'm the reason that you're gone. Yes, it's true. I wasn't true to you. But, that doesn't mean I didn't try. No matter what I say, you've gone away, and I can't bear to say goodbye.

uppin....

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Aiight... I see like four or five topics from 'ThugzDoCry,' and it's pushin' my shit off the page before I can get any replies... it's bad enough with all the sleepers in here... damn...

WTF.... what do I have to do to get some love around here??? Do I have to bribe some motha fuckers in here... I've posted two topics since signing up (for the 3rd time)... and I have 114 posts. I've upped my shit, between the two, about eight times. That means I've replied to 106 topics... damn stop sleepin' y'all....

GOOD POINT WHAT THE FUCK IS IT WITH SLEEPING?
ANYWAYS ON TO YOUR WORK HERE THE BEGINGING CAUGHT ME RIGHT OFF SO THAT IS A BONUS ON YOU.......
YOUR FORMAT IS DIF THEN IVE SEEN PREVIOUSLY BUT IT FITTED PERFECT IN THIS PEACE....AN ARTISTIC HEART INDEED YOU CAUGHT THE EMOTION AND MADE US CATCH IT AS WELL THAT IS A REAL PLUS......
TOWARDS THE END IT FELL REAL SIMPLE BUT DIDNT MAKE LESS TIGHT .KEEP DOING YOU THEY WILL NOTICE WHEN YOUR TIME COMES.

yeah i thought this was a good read, enjoyed the verses, but didn't like the hook much, didn't think it was up to the stanard of the rest, but in most it aspects it was dope.....good drop....peace

can you return the favour and hit this.........
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87520

WORD~PERFECT and Deva thanks for showin' me some love dawgs. I've been doin' this here since 2G... and never felt so much like a rookie... no what I mean? Thank you for the compliments and the honest opinion (Deva about the chorus)... that's what this is all about... peace...