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10-20-03, 02:12 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Chrit VS COM (Do Or Die Match)
IP: D79C 2834
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COM.. Now Is The Time To Prove You Belong In The LLL Voters are to vote on two issues: 1) Who won the battle 2) Should COM Remain In The League Check In Due: Wednesday 10-22-03 Verses Due: Friday 10-24-03 Good Luck & Dont Come Half Assed...... |
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10-20-03, 02:13 PM | #2 | |||||||
Retired.
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In...
Hell... I'll pry even spit today... |
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10-20-03, 02:55 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Syntax and BK gone... Now by Chrit COM's gone from the league...
Called boring from Geru V??? Instead of thuggish its like you've tried to type in retard speak... Another bye week... I'll act like I read ya shit and sigh now... Leave this white kid cut quicker than at basketball tryouts... Outlooks bleak... snap ya neck back... Lookin straight up to finally see me COM win this week? More a chance of seein black dudes in Mayberry... RB community crushes ya chest... left with no chance dude... Alpha Bet is shrinking after in this battle I destroy U... Sorry dude... But getting booted by me is your career peak... Not gangsta... Only shotgun you have is the passenger seat... This is ya funeral drop... Cause after my spit you'll be dearly departin Fuck up ya whole season like that faggot superfan Steve Barton Blah... 12 keyed... Bye now Last edited by Chrit : 10-20-03 at 05:07 PM. |
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10-21-03, 06:39 PM | #4 | ||||
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DMX in your avy?... well i'm a dog in revurse (god)
Sorry bout the typo... i'm still laughing at ya verse You need to rehearse... your verse shows your fatigue change your title to... ' I kept COM in the league ' The dirty sheets in your pic meant to make you look ghetto? Couldn't be part of the street if you hung from a ledge and let go and calling me a whiteboy are you ashamed of your tone? You're the sort when you see black you put your hand on your phone The photographer was hard when you walked through his door I heard he gave you 50 bucks... to show a bit more so chrit don't persist coz theres no future in gay porn You only stand out in line at school with the horn |
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10-21-03, 09:05 PM | #5 | ||||||
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com - you definitely had me laughin for the first 4 lines... after the first half..your verse wasnt good . you coulda took this. oh, and switch back to ur old style- it was much better.. where u rhymes twice per line and had it multi rhymin and simple but effective punches...
chrit = good verse. the punches were consistent thruout. not that great, but consistent.. the flow was off in some parts. you win w/ a few funny lines and an average verse the rest of the way. again, com would won this if his last 6 lines were better . i vote= com stays in LLL i vote = chrit wins |
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10-21-03, 09:44 PM | #6 | |||||||
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Pretty Good Battle...Chrit I've seen U come better Homey But, Overall I still think u won this becuz of the consistency of your punches....Com, Like Feeble said u had good shit goin 4 the first 4 lines then kind of fell off towards the end there....
Battle Vote = Chrit COM's League spot = Stays IN |
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10-21-03, 11:51 PM | #7 | |||||||
Adage, Aphorism, Maxim.
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Heh... Decent Battle Here. Chrit Took It In All Aspects... Wittier Punches And Consistent The Whole Way Through... And Like Feeble Said, COM's First Four Lines Were Pretty Dope... But Verse Went Down Hill After That, So...
Vote=Chrit COM Stay In The Leage? I'm Undecided... So I'm Not Gonna Vote On That.
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10-22-03, 09:48 AM | #8 | |||||||
fuCKYou
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This was pretty good..........Chrit won obviously.......some tight concepts......and some witty shit
Com you showed some signs of potential....but then other times...i was like wft? I say you stay in the league but you better continue to improve and elevaTE Vote Chrit Vote Com to stay in the league |
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10-22-03, 09:54 AM | #9 | ||||||
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Vote Chrit
It was obvious... & as for COM staying in.. i say yes as long as he continues to make an effort to elevate 5-0 Chrit Wins COM Loses But Stays In The League Battle Closed |
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