aight u fisrt 1 hour verse due after checkin

uppin, r u guys gonna battle???????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????

NO DUMB ASS ITS JUST IN FRONTLINESS POSTED AS A BATTLE THREAD>>>>and why would u say uppin????????????omega u posted in ma thread vs onslaught 2???do i smell a d/r

^^u got a good point.. i dont think omega should be able to vote... o wait... he cant anyway.. teehee

o yea... checkin in................................

iight, first off.......... hit this shyyyyt up !!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796
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onslaught? what the fuck this dude thinkin, battlin this chick is like doubtin a mothers intuition.. too risky to commit/
this rap game is filled w/ conditions.. no used, dead ass rhymes, u swimming in em like yous a mortition.. u still wit me in this?/
my job is plain as day, i kill rappers who wanna play, all these fake "kay-slays".. plz believe that aint no "hear-say"/
i kno u feelin what im writing, u wanna bump the words im reciting, too bad for you its in typing/
get a job at the wal-mart, u spelt it wrong.. you spossed to be gift (w)rappin.. not on RB tryin to make miracles happen/
tthose words aint worth the keystrokes that delivered em, they make no sence its an offense like im in "Equilibrium"/
your battles r so weak, all these herbs in these "mean streets" n u cant pull off 1 defeat?/
im not taking this battle seriously, ooo the new up n coming label the 'onlslaught army' guess they finally accepted gays in the military/
my shit speaks for itself, so sicc ur worried for ur health/ dont worry bout droppin your verse, use that shit next time, mine can cover us both, next battle-youll be well rehearsed/

yo ill go give an honest vote on ur other one and i will give this an honest vote as soon as he spits but if u could hit this up w/ a good honest vote that would be tight too.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86737

yo ill get my verse when i get back from school around 5................................................. .................................................. .................................................

yo fuck you apretnice onslaught-x is my brother and I want to see him battle asshole..............................

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whats your name melodramah a word nobody can pronounce man u gay when u went to a strip club they told u to bounce
yous a nerd faking youu ghetto thats my theroy
man i seen better raps in the steve ercal series
you a pop star making rap like justin timberlake
call some friend of yours to vote for your own sake
u gonna break eventally like a freshly sharpend pecil
ill melt u away like a plastic eating utencil
your an overlooked event like a mexican festival
i know what u want but u cant lick my testical

punches - melo
flow - neither
originality - melo

"get a job at the wal-mart, u spelt it wrong.. you spossed to be gift (w)rappin.. not on RB tryin to make miracles happen/"

Best line


vote = melo

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flow..tie
punches.. melodramah
vocab..tie
personals..melodramah

Overall..melodramah

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86845

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84570

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