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Old 10-21-03, 02:06 PM   #1
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5 min Keystyle ~~ "Kept in a jail cel"

IP: 06EF 4E9D

I ride out wit' a hunnit knives
Hun'in(huntin) for em otha guys
Who fron'in like jealous wives
You hate us? Man I'm not surprised
Cuz today I die with my head lookin at the sky
Shooken from the visions that created incisions in my eye
Causing blood to pour down like a waterfall
....And a gallon o'blood cudnt described the pain I endured at all
A man of war, myth & legend when you look at me
Look at me, what you see? 7 scars carved deep in me
Not a G, just a victim of hardship & trials
Got arrested and had cops fingerprint me and put me on file
While my mom's bitchin & screamin...like she cudn't see it
The ice gleamin at me, how cud I not steal it?
When you feel it 'round your neck y'feel a world of respect
Till Flashing lights enter the scene and yo ass kept
In a jail cel........n'gga
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Old 10-21-03, 02:07 PM   #2
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oh btw, (i wrote this shit while i had ma headphones on listening to an instrumental, so trust me it flows)

while listening to it, i jes wrote it up in like 5 mins

jes felt like droppin some quick shit holla back

jes thought i mentioned that

peace!

hit me up wit some feedback
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Old 10-21-03, 02:11 PM   #3
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jes read da verse over like twice and i messed up cuz its a keystyle

jes a lil change

correct lines

The ice gleamin at me.....how cud I not steal it?
Till Flashing lights enter the scene and yo ass iskept

was keyin to fast to even realize those lil mistakes that kinda fucked da flow up

but neways, hit it up wit some feed
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Old 10-21-03, 02:39 PM   #4
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can i get some feedback on this man, i peeped like 6 open mics and not 1 man can't even hit dis shit up?
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Old 10-21-03, 02:55 PM   #5
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not bad for a quick drop, i'll trust ya what ya say bout the flow, but yeah, not bad..........elevation is the key......peace!
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Old 10-21-03, 03:10 PM   #6
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cool, can i get some more feed on this shit?

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Old 10-21-03, 03:16 PM   #7
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nice shit.... feelin it for a 5 min keystyle

I ride out wit' a hunnit knives
Hun'in(huntin) for em otha guys
Who fron'in like jealous wives

starded off clean... lik dat line
good wordplay


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"everybody's a snake, so i keep my grass cut
so i can see em' comein an lite dat ass up"-Jada
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Old 10-21-03, 03:47 PM   #8
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thnx fo all da feed, yo, lets get some more
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Old 10-21-03, 05:33 PM   #9
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come on ya'll, dont sleep on dis open mic man
lay some feedback yo
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Old 10-21-03, 06:57 PM   #10
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its not bad but also not the best i have heard but holla back
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