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5 min Keystyle ~~ "Kept in a jail cel"
IP: 06EF 4E9D
I ride out wit' a hunnit knives
Hun'in(huntin) for em otha guys Who fron'in like jealous wives You hate us? Man I'm not surprised Cuz today I die with my head lookin at the sky Shooken from the visions that created incisions in my eye Causing blood to pour down like a waterfall ....And a gallon o'blood cudnt described the pain I endured at all A man of war, myth & legend when you look at me Look at me, what you see? 7 scars carved deep in me Not a G, just a victim of hardship & trials Got arrested and had cops fingerprint me and put me on file While my mom's bitchin & screamin...like she cudn't see it The ice gleamin at me, how cud I not steal it? When you feel it 'round your neck y'feel a world of respect Till Flashing lights enter the scene and yo ass kept In a jail cel........n'gga |
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
oh btw, (i wrote this shit while i had ma headphones on listening to an instrumental, so trust me it flows)
while listening to it, i jes wrote it up in like 5 mins jes felt like droppin some quick shit holla back jes thought i mentioned that peace! hit me up wit some feedback |
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
jes read da verse over like twice and i messed up cuz its a keystyle
jes a lil change correct lines The ice gleamin at me.....how cud I not steal it? Till Flashing lights enter the scene and yo ass iskept was keyin to fast to even realize those lil mistakes that kinda fucked da flow up but neways, hit it up wit some feed |
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
can i get some feedback on this man, i peeped like 6 open mics and not 1 man can't even hit dis shit up?
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IP: DF7B C8F7
not bad for a quick drop, i'll trust ya what ya say bout the flow, but yeah, not bad..........elevation is the key......peace!
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
cool, can i get some more feed on this shit?
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IP: 4577 CD9A
nice shit.... feelin it for a 5 min keystyle
I ride out wit' a hunnit knives Hun'in(huntin) for em otha guys Who fron'in like jealous wives starded off clean... lik dat line good wordplay Peril Eyes 305 out da box "everybody's a snake, so i keep my grass cut so i can see em' comein an lite dat ass up"-Jada |
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
thnx fo all da feed, yo, lets get some more
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IP: 54EB EC63
come on ya'll, dont sleep on dis open mic man
lay some feedback yo |
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IP: 7D89 C5B2
its not bad but also not the best i have heard but holla back
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