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Old 10-18-03, 11:46 PM   #1
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read and think bout it...

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Yo i got robbed ta day so i'ma spit a lil verse here,

yo no matter how long i sit and think, smoke a blunt and have a drink//
i still cant c y people wud wanna cumit a robbery, espcially when we wus like broz, now he a no show hoe//
I was down town, and my pad got jacked, well guess wut, i'm strapped, and my clips packed//
1 in tha chamber, 15 in tha clip, fuck this hommie and his click, shove a dick//
i gotta remind myself ta keep da peace, but how can i hold, when i gotta deal wit a wanna b thug thief//
over a grand worth was stolen, fuck him, next thing he b seein his my fist rollin//
lost 2 bikes, and my cd's, they jacked my x-box, and my tv, stole my clothes, and watched me stand my killa pose//
there goes part of my life, i took my knife, and confronted him, now i am huntin him//
no more Tupac, dmx, or biggie smalls, no more BMX mountain bike or cellular phone calls//
now look and guess wut happened, one hint left, my knife is now dull//

well thats wut happened, man it sucks gettin robbed well bye bye x-box, bikes, cd's, x-box games, cell phone, money and my t-shirts, oh and this fucker even went into my fridge and stole sum food, that lil bitch.
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Old 10-19-03, 03:32 AM   #2
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got n e feed back peeps, apprciated if so...
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Old 10-19-03, 12:54 PM   #3
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Gettin robbed dus suck big time man.....i feel for ya

this was ight peace but vocab and lyrics need improvin........
keep elevatin homie...stay up

peace.......................fiori
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Old 10-20-03, 12:47 AM   #4
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yea i wasnt tryin ta get vocab, mind wasnt all there when i wrote that.
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Old 10-21-03, 11:09 PM   #5
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no more 2pac, dmx, or biggie smalls, no more bmx mountain bike or cellular phone calls.............tight as line it's kind of funny how you ripped that shit in one line, props, I don't care what know one thinks this mans vocab was ill, I love that shit with meaning,
sorry about the robbing, but sounds like you gottem back, stay up................one




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Old 10-22-03, 04:49 AM   #6
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Yeah thats wack, but nice translation-piece, im feelin the hate myself...
Look at least you know the dude so you can vent on im.
Stole yer food n shit damn! But you got da right bud ta help ya thru it (BC funk is top notch, smokin anythin less; yer playin like hop-scotch)

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