One lonely tear falls from my weary eyes and lands on the wooden lid far below,
As we put another brother into the earth, another victim of hate,
Another one who couldn't take the shit anymore.
Spare a thought for the niggas surviving on benifits,scraping by on the skin of their teeth,
While their whole world crumbles around them, trying hard to pick themselves up from defeat.
Take a look at this world in the present time, money has more power over love,
What hope have you got if you have none? Restless nights spent praying to above.
Children getting by on the streets, weeping over deceased parents,
Homeless brothers begging for food to eat, single mothers working days to pay the rent.
Babies growing up on a battlefield, wars going on all around.
Racial abuse, discrimination, makes it hard for homies to get down.
Rapists feeding off the youth of today, my generation growing up to commit crimes,
In 14 short years i've experienced enough pain to make me feel grateful for this time.
Suicide being the most probable option, for those with nothing to gain,
People living in third world countries, while the rich never hinder their pains,
Ten thousand tears spent for the sisters i've lost to the street, ten thousand cold, sleepness nights.
I cannot write all the wrongs of this world by myself, but hopefully, someone out there will help. . .

Not a bad peice. I was feelin what you were sayin. Could be improved in some area's but like i said it's still a good peice. Keep practisin.

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

^helpful, umm ok it had decent insight but i wasnt really FEELING it but i was feelin it (know what im saying?) i couldnt really grasp the emotion or the words but i still liked. U didnt really say anything that i havent thought of before we all see things around us we want to change but things still remain doubtful. Overall i liked it but something i cant put my finger on repelled me to not liking it even more, it was well written but i just didnt....i dont know, 1luv.

lol well thanks anyway for the feed i'll be less vague next time. sorry havent really been that active on this site lately, but i'll be posting a new pom up in here soon.

People can only do so much by themselfs, but with a group, a lot more can be accomplished. Emotion was felt and this is a true topic. To much happens and I feel you. good drop, Spect JT