RULEZ;
1 round
10-20 linez
no d/r / cruw votes
NO FEEDIN OFF
30 min to spit

i go 1st...holla

right............................................. .................................................. ..

next comes in strapped to da battle like he's a soulja//
in uniform ready to knock how many mic's head off his shoulders//
leave him in da top story of c-n-n exclusive//
holes in his chest like "O"...and permanent bruises//
i spit till yo body fall back and collapse//
is an all-out attack and da gat is about to snap//
catch bullets to ya neck and un-attach it from ya spine//
bones crack and scatter on da floor in crooked lines//
got the win in sight...and how many mic's is far behind//
put ya life in my hands, and ur chances of survivin' are slight//
put u on a tite rope and slit ya throat//
come on nigga...cant beat next...his lyrics are to much a load//
u at levels yet to be discovered, cuz their to low//
put u on a lyrical stove, heat u up and feed u to dogs like bones//

wHerE wE aT....

5 minutes more and this fool is DQ cuz time limit is 30, and is almost 30 min since i layed my verse

your punches r week n so is your flow/ dont be mad at me cuz your dad is a no show/ like an ape thrown out of his home u beg´n fo trees/ monkey ass nigga bet u like my bananaclip, im quick to pull the trigga on punk ass newbes/ sorry to tell u but no bitches alloud up in this joint/ u just a bench rider i run the point/im the alfa, omega yin n yan/ the authentic shit u jus a swingman/ the doors r locked and i got keys/ u couldnt cross my waters even if u flew ova seas/ don´t step to me like that u just a fan, u been watchin/ for u, killin me is not an option/ nb still wanna fight me, he dont got the endurance/ knock his ass sky high like J lo´s life insurance

sorry bout the lines it got messed up, wasnt supose to be like that.............................................. ........

U~P~P~I~N 4 ~V~O~T~E~S~
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flow- new
structure- new
vocab- new
punches- new
wordplay- new
vote- new

howmanymics... you really need to elevate dawg...
new... elevation wouldnt hurt either... but you took this cat
hands down...
props
~Ashy~

iyte man thanks 4 da criticsim i werk on that 4real...
UPPIN 4 MORE VOTES...............................

this was a close battle

flow=how
creativity=new
structure=new........howmany u need to fix yours
punches=new

my vote=new..........nice battle by both of yall

this battle was tight, pretty close............. howmany had a better flow, but newraporders verse was better structure with more solid punches and some creative concepts thrown in, but overall it was similar...... punches won this.....

vote = New_Rap_Order

my bad, forgot to post some links............................ drop an honest vote at:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86413

and:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84655

...peace

uPPiN 4 SuM v0teS tO finiSh tHiS........
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