aight yo, mic check, 1,2,1,2...

Im a monacle, raps bionic soldier// kidnap ya fam, and slaughter them in chronological order// im on top like a cherry on a sundae//
reassure you with a smile "yeah bitch youll probably beat me sumday"// i dunno who this bastards like// but i know its considered a dangerous wepon when you see me with this mic// i'll commit genocide with this object// cause i murder cats like a chinese restaurant in the projects// get it right// im invincible, like superman if the universe ran outta Kryptonite// im a giant and i’ll step on you// I’m in here raising hell like i kicked Satan in the testicles// and when this arrow hits// youll be harder to find then a black dude listening to Aerosmith// face it people this guy is whack// i’ll take ya pride and ya sneakers; make ya ass buy em back// and its hard for his girl 2 face her past// i busted a nut on her face, left it lookin like a facial mask// i’ll beat you and your comrads// so bad youll suffer more fatalities then a newbie playin mortal combat// some people tell me i should tone it down// YOU FUCKIN SUCK DOG!...i just owned the round// own the crown, surprising yall// bitch when it comes to being a rapper you cant hack it like computers with firewalls// i’ll walk up and slap ya fan// you wanna be 50? I’ll leave ya ass half a man// i’ll break ya superstitions// have ya fallen more times then Humpty Dumpty with a cocaine addiction// and it all remains the same// when i get done with this nigga, he’ll have 911 at the end of his name// you dont know me but im scary// murder you so bad youll see your own face in the obituaries// fucker dont want it, no way jose// tragic, this monster was slain today// im cocky, cause its hard to stop me,get it?// im concieted cause im rarely defeated, sweatin?// you better be, like the first letter of ya name was H....I.V// i’ll hand you your ass and youll dissapear with out a trace// cause your destined be another washed up, has been, crippled OG// ill leave ya lyrically lonely if ya try ta spit at me// cuz my rhymes will end you// guess im terminally ill// im a make this shit quick, even if you had rhyme aids tutor you, ya still wouldn’t be sick... bitch- END(not aimed at no one just some shit)

can i get some judgement on this piece,first post on this site itd be appreciated. thanks

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

goddamn, somebody respond to this,just let me know what yall muthafuckers think.

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

upp

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

GREAT WAY ON INTROING IM ALSO BATTLE STYLE (shaolin trained)LOL
THIS WAS GOOD AND WILL GET RECONIZED ATLEAST I WILL KNOW YOU GOT SKILL HIT ME FOR A COLLAB

thanks man, about the colab, im down, peace.

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.