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Asylum
IP: 07E0 A9F2
Can’t you distinguish? From the British and English
Only Scots, Welch and Irish were proud to attain this As England’s engagement is the greatest attainment Now far to complacent, now losing containment Too much asylum swarm like a real living ailment, -Running adjacent, tryin overtaking us blatant What happened to our nation, comin like a rat infestation? But cant use poison or traps for the clean up operation, -Overdue extermination, must be a living termination Need extradition, wake up wit the pitiful wishin, It’s no competition, no freeloading admission. Don’t fit our machine, just like expelled ammunition Country don’t need them, they creatin a partition Between the willing to help and the right wing oppo-si-tion I meet in the middle, no blood but no entrance giv-in…….. |
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IP: 8F25 FB35
One thread per day
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IP: 6F9E F23B
what do you mean 1 thread per day, this i the ONLY one ive posted today, my first one was done the day before, if you check it......................................;.....
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
This was a alright drop...it flowed pretty decent i thought...your vocab was good...you had some good multies...i liked how you ended the piece it was alright...your structure was pretty good i thought too...overall it was a alright drop...keep at it...and keep dropping.
and if you could return some feedback.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721 |
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IP: 6F9E F23B
thnx man, needed some feedback, cant seem to get much of it anymore.....dunno whats happening, but it needs sorted........think cos its people think im a newbie,....peace ma dawg..1!!!!!!!!!
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IP: 2341 1CB6
Ay, it was cool, the flow was nice, i liked the continuous multis...ima look for more from you, and ill reply too ha....
good sh!t |
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IP: 399E F0FD
thats pretty good I like ther beggining political aspect
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IP: 103B C99E
ok, flow was nice, nice use of mulites in the peice....vocab was nice also...structure was good and so was the content...overall it was a good drop...i look foward to reading more of your shit...keep dropping son...
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IP: BA3A 856E
Dope shit. Well structured with good multies and ill flow.
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IP: C1DA C961
good shit...multiez were good...flow was good...the structure and creativity were also dope...vocab was on point...overall this was a nice drop...
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IP: DF7B C8F7
thanx for the positive shit.......much appreciated dawgs
keep readin..........peace to all...... |
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