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Old 11-10-03, 01:50 AM   #1
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blah blah textcee... blah blah you can't spit... blah blah blah... You're full of shit... blah blah blah You don't know what you're talkin about... you can't say my audio isn't hot...




www.soundclick.com/avalonproductions


The Silent Lyrics...


a 10 min song...




hate on me...
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Old 11-10-03, 02:02 AM   #2
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i heard it as at 3:40

the beat is ILL...good flow here
staged a comeback...tv movie...lol

not a fan of the hook..

nice job kid!!
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Old 11-10-03, 02:06 AM   #3
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no... the song was recorded... mixed... and mastered... in 10 mins... not 10 mins as in 10 mins long...
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Old 11-10-03, 04:48 AM   #5
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Old 11-10-03, 04:52 AM   #6
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beat was WACK, I hate it. Quality is ehh.

I like your voice and delivery and flow a lot, you should look into getting a better mic though. I like the flow, but it could be smoother feel me

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Old 11-10-03, 07:15 AM   #7
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if u did this all in 10 mins...i give u props..lol
but other than that
beat allright nothing speacial
flow n deliv was good...lyrics also on point..other than that
i cant find any complaints spet the beat wasnt to great..but good track none the less...
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Old 11-10-03, 11:00 AM   #8
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Good shit... Quality got dropped on soundclick... it's a higher bitrate... original doesn't sound the same... but I feel you...


but Good lookin out... either way...
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Old 11-10-03, 04:30 PM   #9
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umm... not bad for a textcee...... lyrics were simple but str8... flow was good at times..... voice is not to bad..... but i dont care about that to much..... beat horrible....

overall - it was an ok song...... but no where as good as i expected by the way you talk.........
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Old 11-10-03, 04:48 PM   #10
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kid called me a textcee...


*walks out laughin*
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Old 11-11-03, 06:21 AM   #11
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Av this was fucking dope man....
I also got a giggle out of the textcee thing...
but damn man very good everything the flow was never off
excellent set up mic presence.



u get .....

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Old 11-11-03, 10:53 AM   #12
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u sound like point game

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Old 11-13-03, 09:21 PM   #13
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who the hell is point game..?
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Old 11-13-03, 10:22 PM   #14
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you dont know who point game is? lol
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Old 11-14-03, 09:10 AM   #15
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point game is net famous
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