Battle Challange, 15 lines, no fixed votes, categories for vote, flow, disses, punches, creativity, overall

those were your rules kenoras and you said you spit first so check in and go when ready

i will spit in 2-3 hours frum now gotta go get groceries......................................... ..............
then i will lay my verse aight.........................
PEACE

Fair Vote Place Here...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=86801

aight ready wit my verse,

Yo its now time ta drop ma verse, get on da phone and call ya a hurse//
Dude i'ma crack ya skull, and steal ur brain like i did ya moms purse//
i know ur battlin me for publicity, well get ready for all tha humility//
ma lyrics iz like electricity goin threw water, when they hit u, they b hitten yo father//
here goes ur reputation, get ready for ur annhilation, there will b no exceptions//
u'll c that i will win tha voting election, b tha top out of us for tha selection//
every one will b amazed, for i have phased into tha game better today//
man i know u a crack fein, lets go, i'ma make u black and green, i'll jus say its a crack scene//
look, get a grip, dont slip, u gunna trip, ova ya own sick script//
well i'ma flip tha disc, and leace u in bliss, for all these other emceez to diss//
my skills are so ill, that if i popped a medical pill, i'd b sick, coughed and chilled//
its tha last line, and i jus dropped my verse on tha site of a dime, twisted up like lemon and lime//

Holla wit yo verse.

when ya gun spit yo verse dawg, holla............................................. ...............................
PEACE............................................. ...

I'll give it to ya dawg you got a few things correct//
for a hurse to be called and me leavin in bliss is a safe bet//
but you'll be in tha wood box and bliss from you gettin defeated//
hope there's no kids watching while this bitch gets castrated//
now I guess your wondering how I can castrate a bitch//
I'll cut off tha dick that's in ya mouth then sow it shut with one stich//
so I guess we're both happy cause now you can always suck dick and I dont have to hear you snitch//
here's some advice "hit me up once you've elevated man"//
OH I've forgot he's allready gone as high as he can//
do you really think peops don feel ya cause your vocabulary//
no its cause ya cant type good hoding onto those dick ya carry//
HOLY SHIT how many dicks do I have to deprive him of//
is fuckin other guys the only way he can arrive to love//
I guess in glosing I should give this prick slack//
GOD DAMN YOU FAGGOT GIVE ME MY DICK BACK//


aight there it is lets get some honest votes and I really dont care how it goes man I really like'd that battle I think its one of my best so far

oh there's a typo on the next to last line it should be "closing and not "glosing".................................................. ...

Va slim gets dis based on punches

both needs elevation tho

structure = slim
punches = slim

slim was really too repetitive tho, u talked about dicks too much and repeated bliss twice

but u got this tho

can u plz hit this up with an honest vote

its been slept on and i cant up it anymore
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86988

flow=va slim
disses=kenoras
punches= va slim
creativity=va slim
overall=va slim

va slim got this with betta punches and flow---

yo peep my battle out with abomination--thanxxx

Wack Ass Battle
Punches=no1
Overall=Slim
Metas=No1
Vocabulary=no1
Vote=Slim he came better with his verse but ya both need 2 elevate~

I'm goin with Slim here on punches and flow. Both need elevation but V.A came better off on this one. I cant poll coz I'm at home so get a mod to add my vote.

Vote Slim

__________________

HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

disses, tha only disses slim got in was about dicks, all of his spit was about dicks, wut tha fuk, slim got votes for spitten about dicks, .................................... dats fuckin bull o shit o.

yo uppin this shit for votes

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iight...
kenoras verse was.... OK.... it was mad elementary.. n lacked some vocab... good drop tho
im voting for slim cuz his verse had harder punches.. but u did feed a lil AND all that dick stuff is plaaaaayed.. that was the basis of ya whole verse. anyways, slims verse came harder..
kenoras good drop keep elevating
vote=slim

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^slept on shyyt

aight yo upin this shit again can we try to get this shit closed

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